Comments received on poems by Keeya_3
Fear of Reality
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Life is told to be a struggle and it’s not the first thing we would want to cuddle
this is my favourite line of the poem .... i definately don\'t want to cuddle my life lol good words. no point being fake or unreal .. i agree we should be as genuine as can be
May 6th, 2018 12:33
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Life is told to be a struggle and it’s not the first thing we would want to cuddle
this is my favourite line of the poem .... i definately don\'t want to cuddle my life lol good words. no point being fake or unreal .. i agree we should be as genuine as can be
May 6th, 2018 12:33
Fear of Reality
onepauly said:
you leave your thoughts their?
so where are you?
do you know how to create a thought? how about the birth of an idea? good one! the nature of personal reality. keep up the good work!
May 6th, 2018 12:04
onepauly said:
you leave your thoughts their?
so where are you?
do you know how to create a thought? how about the birth of an idea? good one! the nature of personal reality. keep up the good work!
May 6th, 2018 12:04
Fear of Reality
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WLCOME KEEYA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ interesting ! The title is how many people live their lives \"Fear of Reality\" WHY ? Like you i like to be OPEN (read my poems !) rather than FAKE (we live in a FAKE World !) On MPS most of us are REAL in our Poetry and that is what makes it an exciting site ! We all have FEARS & PHOBIAS but as you say ~ if we meet them head on they evaporate ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ but not scaring ! More poems please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) The way MPS works is ~ we read & comment on each others poems and build up a group of MPS Friends ~ I would like to be your FIRST ~ OK ~ B !
May 6th, 2018 11:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WLCOME KEEYA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ interesting ! The title is how many people live their lives \"Fear of Reality\" WHY ? Like you i like to be OPEN (read my poems !) rather than FAKE (we live in a FAKE World !) On MPS most of us are REAL in our Poetry and that is what makes it an exciting site ! We all have FEARS & PHOBIAS but as you say ~ if we meet them head on they evaporate ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ but not scaring ! More poems please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) The way MPS works is ~ we read & comment on each others poems and build up a group of MPS Friends ~ I would like to be your FIRST ~ OK ~ B !
May 6th, 2018 11:24
