Comments received on poems by Static
Faded Sun
SLR said:
Thought provoking write. The darkness can be many things to us depending on our state of mind at that time. Happy, sad, calm, worried, relief that the day is finally done. Welcome to MPS! Great first post.
May 21st, 2018 21:45
SLR said:
Thought provoking write. The darkness can be many things to us depending on our state of mind at that time. Happy, sad, calm, worried, relief that the day is finally done. Welcome to MPS! Great first post.
May 21st, 2018 21:45
Faded Sun
MrNobody40 said:
For me the darkness symbolizes peace of mind. When I get home from work at 1 am, everything is quiet, peaceful. Everyone is asleep. I hear nothing. Its wonderful. Great poem. Thank you for sharing
May 20th, 2018 07:42
MrNobody40 said:
For me the darkness symbolizes peace of mind. When I get home from work at 1 am, everything is quiet, peaceful. Everyone is asleep. I hear nothing. Its wonderful. Great poem. Thank you for sharing
May 20th, 2018 07:42
Faded Sun
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME STATIC ~ Thanks for your first POEM on MPS ~ much food for thought ! For 35 years I have seen the SUN Rise & Set each day so I have Faith it will continue for the next 35 ! Night and Day (due to the Earth\'s 24 hour rotation) are both equally important ! However as you imply the night is more scary and sometimes (when we are under stress) we long for the DAY to come ~ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing an elegant \"free verse\" poem. Please check my POEMS ~ thanks BRIAN (UK)
May 20th, 2018 04:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME STATIC ~ Thanks for your first POEM on MPS ~ much food for thought ! For 35 years I have seen the SUN Rise & Set each day so I have Faith it will continue for the next 35 ! Night and Day (due to the Earth\'s 24 hour rotation) are both equally important ! However as you imply the night is more scary and sometimes (when we are under stress) we long for the DAY to come ~ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing an elegant \"free verse\" poem. Please check my POEMS ~ thanks BRIAN (UK)
May 20th, 2018 04:13
Faded Sun
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME STATIC ~ Thanks for your first POEM on MPS ~ much food for thought ! For 35 years I have seen the SUN Rise & Set each day so I have Faith it will continue for the next 35 ! Night and Day (due to the Earth\'s 24 hour rotation) are both equally important ! However as you imply the night is more scary and sometimes (when we are under stress) we long for the DAY to come ~ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing an elegant \"free verse\" poem. Please check my POEMS ~ thanks BRIAN (UK)
May 20th, 2018 04:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME STATIC ~ Thanks for your first POEM on MPS ~ much food for thought ! For 35 years I have seen the SUN Rise & Set each day so I have Faith it will continue for the next 35 ! Night and Day (due to the Earth\'s 24 hour rotation) are both equally important ! However as you imply the night is more scary and sometimes (when we are under stress) we long for the DAY to come ~ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing an elegant \"free verse\" poem. Please check my POEMS ~ thanks BRIAN (UK)
May 20th, 2018 04:13
