Insomniac
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME PLE ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem ~ very thought provoking !

Sleep ~ sleep I couldn\'t get to sleep
Not even countin\' all New Zealand\'s sheep !
Is insomnia the thief of (night)time ~ YES !


Poem has a nice structure six neat verses with lots of rhythm ! The subject is subjective ~ dreams ~ causes ~ insomnia ~ hurts ~ unenlightenment (good word for a Wednesday ?) ~ the Period and finally the HOUR ! We all suffer these incongruities ~ so (in essence) we are all empathetic and share your insomniacal pain ~ thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours Brian (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B !

May 30th, 2018 03:20