Comments received on poems by markashley1961
I am just a shadow
Rin the Magnificent said:
Beautiful poem, and a strong, emotional imagery emanating from it.
Well done!
November 5th, 2024 11:58
Rin the Magnificent said:
Beautiful poem, and a strong, emotional imagery emanating from it.
Well done!
November 5th, 2024 11:58
I am just a shadow
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of humility that there is far too little of now days. A poem of hope that we all need. A poem of love that again is in shortage. Lovely
October 7th, 2024 07:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of humility that there is far too little of now days. A poem of hope that we all need. A poem of love that again is in shortage. Lovely
October 7th, 2024 07:13
morning moment
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and peaceful imaged fill this poem causing a feeling of tranquility. Lovely
August 6th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and peaceful imaged fill this poem causing a feeling of tranquility. Lovely
August 6th, 2024 05:26
Winter Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said in vivid images producing feelings of nostalgia and a longing to return to those days and place.
July 30th, 2024 06:44
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said in vivid images producing feelings of nostalgia and a longing to return to those days and place.
July 30th, 2024 06:44
Summer Rain
Firefall said:
I was intrigued by your poem’s title. Your words capture the essence of the summer’s rain.
July 24th, 2024 17:42
Firefall said:
I was intrigued by your poem’s title. Your words capture the essence of the summer’s rain.
July 24th, 2024 17:42
Summer Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Whether just poetic description with stunning imagery or metaphoric of the storm inside it is great.
July 24th, 2024 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
Whether just poetic description with stunning imagery or metaphoric of the storm inside it is great.
July 24th, 2024 07:35
\"All the leaves are brown...\"
Cassie58 said:
Drawn by the title, Mamas and Papas, California Dreamin. How I loved their music. This poem has beautiful imagery, albeit a melancholic tone. Whenever I see a solitary magpie, I find I am always searching for a second one. Brown leaves and grey skies have an autumn feel, even in summer. Pleased I stopped by, to read your work today.
July 18th, 2024 09:52
Cassie58 said:
Drawn by the title, Mamas and Papas, California Dreamin. How I loved their music. This poem has beautiful imagery, albeit a melancholic tone. Whenever I see a solitary magpie, I find I am always searching for a second one. Brown leaves and grey skies have an autumn feel, even in summer. Pleased I stopped by, to read your work today.
July 18th, 2024 09:52
Branded
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic in its imagery it broadcasts such a message. Nicely written.
July 17th, 2024 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic in its imagery it broadcasts such a message. Nicely written.
July 17th, 2024 10:15
The Art of Love
Alan R said:
What an eloquent, thought provoking write! Enjoyed every word
June 11th, 2024 01:49
Alan R said:
What an eloquent, thought provoking write! Enjoyed every word
June 11th, 2024 01:49
Wish You Were Here
Tom Dylan said:
Love the imagery in this poem. Very well written.
November 10th, 2023 11:13
Tom Dylan said:
Love the imagery in this poem. Very well written.
November 10th, 2023 11:13
Waterloo Sunset
Olaf Gatermann said:
What a wonderful love letter to London! Very credible, very intimate...
November 1st, 2023 16:05
Olaf Gatermann said:
What a wonderful love letter to London! Very credible, very intimate...
November 1st, 2023 16:05
Morning Walk
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing nicely expressed )) like the use of alliteration in this
July 4th, 2023 06:50
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing nicely expressed )) like the use of alliteration in this
July 4th, 2023 06:50
appen
dusk arising said:
Appen as this worra a reet gud advenchah tu reed. Ent gorra clue worrits baat but ad tu see it fru tu frooisshun.
January 25th, 2019 05:26
dusk arising said:
Appen as this worra a reet gud advenchah tu reed. Ent gorra clue worrits baat but ad tu see it fru tu frooisshun.
January 25th, 2019 05:26
appen
dusk arising said:
Appen as this worra a reet gud advenchah tu reed. Ent gorra clue worrits baat but ad tu see it fru tu frooisshun.
January 25th, 2019 05:12
dusk arising said:
Appen as this worra a reet gud advenchah tu reed. Ent gorra clue worrits baat but ad tu see it fru tu frooisshun.
January 25th, 2019 05:12
appen
sylviasearcher said:
Is this to do with jack the ripper or have I totally misread it?
At first I thought it was waking up to dark and tortured thoughts and I guess it could be.
But you wrote it in a way which took me to dark alleys in London. I suppose if it is the morning\'s mind it\'s an intriguing metaphor.
January 25th, 2019 03:53
sylviasearcher said:
Is this to do with jack the ripper or have I totally misread it?
At first I thought it was waking up to dark and tortured thoughts and I guess it could be.
But you wrote it in a way which took me to dark alleys in London. I suppose if it is the morning\'s mind it\'s an intriguing metaphor.
January 25th, 2019 03:53
Restless Sleep
Fay Slimm. said:
The search for lost love finds us even in our deepest dreams Mark - -such a touching read.
January 18th, 2019 07:24
Fay Slimm. said:
The search for lost love finds us even in our deepest dreams Mark - -such a touching read.
January 18th, 2019 07:24
Restless Sleep
sylviasearcher said:
Powerful emotive write.
I had visions of a crumbling land.
January 18th, 2019 04:13
sylviasearcher said:
Powerful emotive write.
I had visions of a crumbling land.
January 18th, 2019 04:13
forgotten field
dusk arising said:
Wonderful writing. My busy mind immediately worries me that night has nocturnal life both out there in the field, hill and desert as well as within us. The stuff dreams are made of?
January 17th, 2019 08:56
dusk arising said:
Wonderful writing. My busy mind immediately worries me that night has nocturnal life both out there in the field, hill and desert as well as within us. The stuff dreams are made of?
January 17th, 2019 08:56
forgotten field
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this first rate write on dark fields of lament Mark - straight into my favourites with this poetic masterpiece.
January 17th, 2019 05:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this first rate write on dark fields of lament Mark - straight into my favourites with this poetic masterpiece.
January 17th, 2019 05:58
forgotten field
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write, this could be this earth before very long.
January 17th, 2019 04:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write, this could be this earth before very long.
January 17th, 2019 04:15
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