Comments received on poems by markashley1961



Wish You Were Here
Tom C Dylan said:

Love the imagery in this poem. Very well written.

November 10th, 2023 11:13

Ode to The Pink Couch
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent work.

November 2nd, 2023 02:52

Waterloo Sunset
Olaf Gatermann said:

What a wonderful love letter to London! Very credible, very intimate...

November 1st, 2023 16:05

Morning Walk
Thomas W Case said:

Absolutely amazing. Great stuff.

October 30th, 2023 07:57

Morning Walk
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A lovely writing nicely expressed )) like the use of alliteration in this

July 4th, 2023 06:50

appen
Neville said:

dark an broody, bloomin bril.... N

January 25th, 2019 13:25

appen
dusk arising said:

Appen as this worra a reet gud advenchah tu reed. Ent gorra clue worrits baat but ad tu see it fru tu frooisshun.


January 25th, 2019 05:26

appen
dusk arising said:

Appen as this worra a reet gud advenchah tu reed. Ent gorra clue worrits baat but ad tu see it fru tu frooisshun.


January 25th, 2019 05:12

appen
sylviasearcher said:

Is this to do with jack the ripper or have I totally misread it?

At first I thought it was waking up to dark and tortured thoughts and I guess it could be.

But you wrote it in a way which took me to dark alleys in London. I suppose if it is the morning\'s mind it\'s an intriguing metaphor.

January 25th, 2019 03:53

Restless Sleep
Fay Slimm. said:

The search for lost love finds us even in our deepest dreams Mark - -such a touching read.

January 18th, 2019 07:24

Restless Sleep
sylviasearcher said:

Powerful emotive write.
I had visions of a crumbling land.

January 18th, 2019 04:13

forgotten field
psychofemale said:

Wow! Very good stuff :)

January 17th, 2019 22:53

forgotten field
dusk arising said:

Wonderful writing. My busy mind immediately worries me that night has nocturnal life both out there in the field, hill and desert as well as within us. The stuff dreams are made of?

January 17th, 2019 08:56

forgotten field
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for this first rate write on dark fields of lament Mark - straight into my favourites with this poetic masterpiece.

January 17th, 2019 05:58

forgotten field
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong write, this could be this earth before very long.

January 17th, 2019 04:15

forgotten field
Michael Edwards said:

This is an outstanding write both in terms of language and construction - a powerful read.

January 17th, 2019 03:31

forgotten field
sylviasearcher said:

This is a powerful piece.
So unapologetically barren and desolate.
I know this land.

January 17th, 2019 03:10

Empty Spaces
psychofemale said:

very touching piece of work you have here

January 16th, 2019 19:09

Empty Spaces
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a heart-touching read Mark - - those spaces which dark with emptiness are haunted with whispers I too well remember.

January 16th, 2019 09:44

Empty Spaces
sylviasearcher said:

I know that empty space...

January 16th, 2019 09:15

Dream Sequence (i)
sylviasearcher said:

Oh this is beautifully dark and light all swirled together with some dreamy fog making wonder what I just saw in my head.

January 15th, 2019 08:42

Descent Into Hell
sylviasearcher said:

I have just discovered your poems and am awe struck at how powerful and emotive they are.

July 26th, 2018 08:33

Dante\'s Lament
sylviasearcher said:

What an amazing write. I really connected to the waves of emotion.

July 26th, 2018 08:31

Dante\'s Lament
Goldfinch60 said:

But after that sleep the sun will shine and the light will be with you.

July 23rd, 2018 02:58