Comments received on poems by unfinishedepiphany27



Crumbling
Rainbow said:

Very good imagery in this poem

July 25th, 2018 01:20

Delusions
Liberty_Shadows said:

i think this poem is very straight forward, and i love that. i like how its so short, but so relatable. awesome poem!

July 23rd, 2018 18:38

Delusions
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliantly done flew straight off the page.

July 23rd, 2018 10:40

Shine For Me
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write.

July 21st, 2018 00:21

New Generation
Syd said:

I love the positive vibe to this poem.

- Syd

July 5th, 2018 17:59

New Generation
dusk arising said:

We will HAVE to learn to modify our point of view as we accept the wisdom simply being around for a number of years will bring us!
Life is beautiful, idealism does get in the way of enjoying its beauty.
Much as every generation comes to understand once a few years have passed.

July 5th, 2018 15:49

Bruises
Christina8 said:

Welcome to MPS! This is an agonizing write, but so well done. So many people have to face what you are writing about. Thanks for sharing!

July 2nd, 2018 20:20