Comments received on poems by Shirali2005
Love and Care
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! It has structure & character. Free verse ~ 18 lines ~ with good rhythm ~ nice to recite ~ I\'m a performance Poet ! Lines 1 - 7 pose the Q \"Is it love to care ?\". Lines 8 - 18 the idea of the now & future existence of love & care in a World that seems hell bent on destroying itself ! Thanks for making us think ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ I share my site with my Fiancee who is in NZ. We love EMOS ! B !
July 15th, 2018 16:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! It has structure & character. Free verse ~ 18 lines ~ with good rhythm ~ nice to recite ~ I\'m a performance Poet ! Lines 1 - 7 pose the Q \"Is it love to care ?\". Lines 8 - 18 the idea of the now & future existence of love & care in a World that seems hell bent on destroying itself ! Thanks for making us think ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ I share my site with my Fiancee who is in NZ. We love EMOS ! B !
July 15th, 2018 16:55