Comments received on poems by HannahJ442
Improvisation
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HANNAH ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent. 20 balanced lines full of Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Revelation ! To some extent all of our lives are a (daily) improvisation. We both saw ourselves (Brian & Angela) as your elegant poem suggests ~ as we transform ourselves to suit the environment & mood & situation like chameleons ! We dress and talk and interact to blend in and be invisible ~ wearing the Mask of Improvisation ! We have been to Masquerade Balls in Venice & New Orleans and that\'s how it works. Your poem triggered a lot of images in our minds ! More Poems please ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. MPS works by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK ~ B & A.
July 31st, 2018 11:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HANNAH ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent. 20 balanced lines full of Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Revelation ! To some extent all of our lives are a (daily) improvisation. We both saw ourselves (Brian & Angela) as your elegant poem suggests ~ as we transform ourselves to suit the environment & mood & situation like chameleons ! We dress and talk and interact to blend in and be invisible ~ wearing the Mask of Improvisation ! We have been to Masquerade Balls in Venice & New Orleans and that\'s how it works. Your poem triggered a lot of images in our minds ! More Poems please ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. MPS works by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK ~ B & A.
July 31st, 2018 11:21