Comments received on poems by cheyenneherren
half of me
MendedFences27 said:
A lost love can be a heartbreak, as if you can no longer exist, but the only cure is time. The pain will ever so slowly ease, life will seem more worth living, until eventually something or someone will enter and steal your heart once again. Keep on writing, it can only help, and you write beautifully. Your poem intrigued me because the title was similar to one I wrote, \"Just half.\" The pain of a leaving by someone you love must be universal. We all feel it. Keep your eyes open to the world and soon your heart will follow.
Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 6th, 2018 14:31
MendedFences27 said:
A lost love can be a heartbreak, as if you can no longer exist, but the only cure is time. The pain will ever so slowly ease, life will seem more worth living, until eventually something or someone will enter and steal your heart once again. Keep on writing, it can only help, and you write beautifully. Your poem intrigued me because the title was similar to one I wrote, \"Just half.\" The pain of a leaving by someone you love must be universal. We all feel it. Keep your eyes open to the world and soon your heart will follow.
Loved your poem. - Phil A.
August 6th, 2018 14:31
