Comments received on poems by Edger_Ravelle
The Garden Nation
sophin said:
interesting words, E. I love the imagery and the personification/metaphors in this piece. well done.
February 8th, 2022 13:09
sophin said:
interesting words, E. I love the imagery and the personification/metaphors in this piece. well done.
February 8th, 2022 13:09
The Garden Nation
Rocky Lagou said:
Nice! I like the imagery and use of colors in this piece. And the way her \"army\" wasn\'t enough to \"comfort her\" is woeful. Good one! 👍
February 8th, 2022 10:16
Rocky Lagou said:
Nice! I like the imagery and use of colors in this piece. And the way her \"army\" wasn\'t enough to \"comfort her\" is woeful. Good one! 👍
February 8th, 2022 10:16
The Beast of Man, The Man of Beast
Rocky Lagou said:
Nicely written! I love the gothic feel of this poem and definitely felt some Poe influence through this piece. I love the darker side of poetry and the invocation of our vile sides. Good job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 09:51
Rocky Lagou said:
Nicely written! I love the gothic feel of this poem and definitely felt some Poe influence through this piece. I love the darker side of poetry and the invocation of our vile sides. Good job! 👍
February 8th, 2022 09:51
The Melancholy Malady
Paul Bell said:
Great write. The passing of someone close is always going to hurt, and no words will change that. Life sure is fickle, and for a time stops us in our tracks, but we keep going, life dictates that we do.
February 6th, 2022 07:39
Paul Bell said:
Great write. The passing of someone close is always going to hurt, and no words will change that. Life sure is fickle, and for a time stops us in our tracks, but we keep going, life dictates that we do.
February 6th, 2022 07:39
