Comments received on poems by Rowell
Christmas past memories last.
Goldfinch60 said:
If this is your starting to write poetry you will have no problems in so doing.
Welcome to MPS.
December 18th, 2018 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
If this is your starting to write poetry you will have no problems in so doing.
Welcome to MPS.
December 18th, 2018 02:20
Christmas past memories last.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome ROWELL : Thanks for your first Poem. Excellently penned and a great theme of Christmas past nostalgia ! My critique would mirror SANTITAS. Five balanced Quatrains with a consistent rhyme pattern a-a-b-b. Personally I would accept SLEIGH & GALAXY as an acceptable \"half rhyme\" I am a performance Poet ~ and would pronounce them as SLAY & GALAXAY which does rhyme ~ poetic licence ~ OK. Please check my Site. Yours BRIAN
December 17th, 2018 18:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome ROWELL : Thanks for your first Poem. Excellently penned and a great theme of Christmas past nostalgia ! My critique would mirror SANTITAS. Five balanced Quatrains with a consistent rhyme pattern a-a-b-b. Personally I would accept SLEIGH & GALAXY as an acceptable \"half rhyme\" I am a performance Poet ~ and would pronounce them as SLAY & GALAXAY which does rhyme ~ poetic licence ~ OK. Please check my Site. Yours BRIAN
December 17th, 2018 18:58
