Comments received on poems by Goddess of the Mist



A Night Time Stroll
Doggerel Dave said:

I liked this muchly, Goddess. Charged with expectation... Relief that the conclusion allowed..........

January 14th, 2024 04:39

A Night Time Stroll
Thomas W Case said:

Very atmospheric.

November 3rd, 2023 23:37

One Final Hurt
2781 said:

I like a daydream.

November 2nd, 2023 23:24

Gabe
Thomas W Case said:

Well-crafted and very creative.

November 2nd, 2023 02:24

Unless I Suffer
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful.

October 16th, 2023 01:18

Earth and Gods
peto said:

Can\'t believe I\'m first to view this
Tremendous rhyme rhythm and flow
Great content
Thoroughly enjoyed how you told it
Super talented

September 28th, 2023 13:32

Darkly Happy on a Yoga Mat
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Sometimes it’s difficult to feel happy .. and yeah have to find what makes us feel better

Yoga can help ! I’ve done yoga before .. not in a while tho now

Nice writing 🙂

July 14th, 2023 01:05

Evening Owl
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:


Great poem

Love the last line

infinitely wise‘

Some beautiful words in this




July 14th, 2023 00:56

Ode to Mother Nature
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Really lovely writing .. beautiful words I liked the read 🙂

July 14th, 2023 00:49

Spellbound
jarcher54 said:

You capture wistful universal human sensations and feelings so thoughtfully. Always moving.

June 7th, 2023 11:14

Spellbound
rhmn_7 said:

But there is only so much fire your dreams can endure..

March 5th, 2023 09:13

Never Good Enough
jarcher54 said:

Well, you are certainly more than good enough when you express yourself like this. Explore the negatives, but grab hold of the positives. You are a beautiful spirit.

January 13th, 2023 22:15

Obsessed, I Won\'t Obsess
kaetlynn ✿ said:

beautifully written and still articulated in a way that is relatable. great poetry :) thank you for sharing!

December 23rd, 2022 14:07

Never Good Enough
L. B. Mek said:

saddest of all
is how we accumulate the negatives
let them, act as drag
in our pace of life
however small they may be in comparison
to our positives
the potency we afford them, cuts deep..
(such a relatable read, thanks for sharing
stay strong!)

December 23rd, 2022 07:47

Obsessed, I Won\'t Obsess
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.... so hard to read the start as many of my days can begin this!
Thank you for sharing

September 25th, 2022 03:38

Obsessed, I Won\'t Obsess
Ahhrey said:

(y)

September 19th, 2022 15:43

Darkly Happy on a Yoga Mat
Rozina said:

Really enjoyed this. Sometimes we have to dig deep but we can find a past happiness moment.

April 17th, 2022 17:23

Darkly Happy on a Yoga Mat
spilleronsheet said:

A very beautiful poetry
Truly felt the ah-ha moment reading this….

April 17th, 2022 16:15

Ode to Mother Nature
jarcher54 said:

LB is right... this is simply majestic. You are overdue for something new... your pen name alone is a poem, but I miss seeing something new from you.

April 15th, 2022 12:17

Who I Wanted To Be
spilleronsheet said:

Well crafted dear poet
A true reflection

December 20th, 2021 00:36

Who I Wanted To Be
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Very lovely ! Self love is important ... I never had that when I was younger and I can still struggle with doubts about myself , sometimes

October 11th, 2021 06:03

Who I Wanted To Be
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful, thanks for sharing

October 11th, 2021 05:58

Devil Kisses
cosmacpan said:

\"The kiss of life, the kiss of death\"

tears of gratitude or hot and eager kisses
all these must be lived not imagined
but it is not given to all of us to know the suffering

August 8th, 2021 05:13

Slow Drip
Accidental Poet said:

Love is much like a drug, only better. Great write Goddess. ; )

July 17th, 2021 05:41

Ode to Mother Nature
L. B. Mek said:

oh snap, we both had that majestic nature
as our topic for last postings,
although mine is a mere feeble scribble
yours, dear Poetess
made me think I was reading Wordsworth
only brilliantly attuned, to our 21st century
poetic\'s delicacy of generational, preference;
from \'Ode to Mother Nature\' July 2021
\'I want to follow your forested paths through misty woodland streams
drink my morning sun on crystal mountain tops
Mother Nature, I have always loved you
You, the mountains, the oceans are my mother
You, the cold, clear creeks are my home and my refresher\'..
(and yet centuries apart
a love of nature, mirrored
as if written side by side)
from \'LINES COMPOSED
A FEW MILES ABOVE TINTERN ABBEY\' July 1798:
\'Five years have past; five summers, with the length
Of five long winters! and again I hear
These waters, rolling from their mountain-springs
With a soft inland murmur.--Once again
Do I behold these steep and lofty cliffs,
That on a wild secluded scene impress\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-34681 )


July 5th, 2021 06:34

Ode to Mother Nature
Doggerel Dave said:

Your changing relationship with Nature and the freedom it gives you, is well chronicled in this piece. enjoyed very much.

July 4th, 2021 20:29

Ode to Mother Nature
Accidental Poet said:

Beautiful write for Mother Nature. ; )

July 4th, 2021 16:32

Evening Owl
A.C Doomcraft said:

\"Invader from a mystic realm, the ultimate infringer\" is such a cool line, overall great poem about a beautiful yet deadly creature.

June 23rd, 2021 02:55

Devil Kisses
A.C Doomcraft said:

I read the poem twice, really cool concept, looking down your poem list i envy you, you are very prolific, you may just have inspired me to write today, quite the feat :) .

June 23rd, 2021 02:49

Devil Kisses
Doggerel Dave said:

Even if you were really angry, you still had much control over what you were writing.....

June 21st, 2021 01:56

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