Comments received on poems by Goddess of the Mist



The Darkness
fallenAngel1🕊 said:

I do love a poem with a nice rhyme scheme,for me,...as I read one it just rolls off the toung like water over a waterfall. Very nice🤗

October 25th, 2021 20:21

Who I Wanted To Be
yellowrose said:

Very lovely ! Self love is important ... I never had that when I was younger and I can still struggle with doubts about myself , sometimes

October 11th, 2021 06:03

Who I Wanted To Be
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful, thanks for sharing

October 11th, 2021 05:58

Devil Kisses
cosmacpan said:

\"The kiss of life, the kiss of death\"

tears of gratitude or hot and eager kisses
all these must be lived not imagined
but it is not given to all of us to know the suffering

August 8th, 2021 05:13

Slow Drip
Accidental Poet said:

Love is much like a drug, only better. Great write Goddess. ; )

July 17th, 2021 05:41

Ode to Mother Nature
L. B. Mek said:

oh snap, we both had that majestic nature
as our topic for last postings,
although mine is a mere feeble scribble
yours, dear Poetess
made me think I was reading Wordsworth
only brilliantly attuned, to our 21st century
poetic\'s delicacy of generational, preference;
from \'Ode to Mother Nature\' July 2021
\'I want to follow your forested paths through misty woodland streams
drink my morning sun on crystal mountain tops
Mother Nature, I have always loved you
You, the mountains, the oceans are my mother
You, the cold, clear creeks are my home and my refresher\'..
(and yet centuries apart
a love of nature, mirrored
as if written side by side)
from \'LINES COMPOSED
A FEW MILES ABOVE TINTERN ABBEY\' July 1798:
\'Five years have past; five summers, with the length
Of five long winters! and again I hear
These waters, rolling from their mountain-springs
With a soft inland murmur.--Once again
Do I behold these steep and lofty cliffs,
That on a wild secluded scene impress\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-34681 )


July 5th, 2021 06:34

Ode to Mother Nature
Doggerel Dave said:

Your changing relationship with Nature and the freedom it gives you, is well chronicled in this piece. enjoyed very much.

July 4th, 2021 20:29

Ode to Mother Nature
Accidental Poet said:

Beautiful write for Mother Nature. ; )

July 4th, 2021 16:32

Evening Owl
A.C Doomcraft said:

\"Invader from a mystic realm, the ultimate infringer\" is such a cool line, overall great poem about a beautiful yet deadly creature.

June 23rd, 2021 02:55

Devil Kisses
A.C Doomcraft said:

I read the poem twice, really cool concept, looking down your poem list i envy you, you are very prolific, you may just have inspired me to write today, quite the feat :) .

June 23rd, 2021 02:49

Devil Kisses
Doggerel Dave said:

Even if you were really angry, you still had much control over what you were writing.....

June 21st, 2021 01:56

Evening Owl
John Prophet said:

Always loved the haunting sound of owls at night. Beautiful write.

June 15th, 2021 08:56

Evening Owl
Accidental Poet said:

Very well penned Goddess. ; )

May 30th, 2021 09:26

Evening Owl
Doggerel Dave said:

There be plenty of wisdom and some goddessing going on with owls, so you are on target Goddess of the Mist.
And you\'ve added value in your well constructed poem.

May 30th, 2021 06:09

The Darkness
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Woww awesome rhyme scheme, i was admiring how words and sentences melded into the next in super style and word choice. Sensational intrigue,! Kudos!!!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

May 6th, 2021 14:52

The Darkness
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!

April 19th, 2021 03:56

Power of Your Song
L. B. Mek said:

\'All that powerful love you\'ve been singing of
all those things that you say you will do
is it all just beautiful poetry
meant to make a romantic heart blue

Still, I will lose myself in them
all those promises, strung along for so long\'..
relatable on so many levels, a great read

March 25th, 2021 04:58

Power of Your Song
yellowrose said:

Nicely expressed 🙂

March 24th, 2021 02:21

Power of Your Song
Goldfinch60 said:

May the words within that song bring true love to you.

Andy

March 24th, 2021 01:42

Magick of the Night
L. B. Mek said:

soothing, in its seemingly effortless flow
really well executed
thanks for sharing dear poet

March 15th, 2021 07:19

Magick of the Night
SunSearcher said:

I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing.

~SS

March 15th, 2021 05:49

Magick of the Night
Doggerel Dave said:

Very picture laden, rhythmic , easy to read - enjoyed very much.
Forgive me for asking, Goddess of the Mist: is this in any sense autobiographical?

March 14th, 2021 23:51

I Came Back Slowly
Doggerel Dave said:

Perception - never seen it discussed lyrically before, and that will be OK if I never see it again - this will do for me!

March 8th, 2021 06:42

I Came Back Slowly
L. B. Mek said:

poignant last line!
\'between all the chaos of circumstance and the unfathomably accumulated \'good lucks\' that impacts a life,
exactly what role does choice
and intent of purposed \'will\', play
are we the true architects of consequence or destiny, or is reality our contrasting - construct of orderly comprehension
for this insanity we dwell in..\'
a wonderful write, challenging in depth of scope and complexity of topic dear poet, thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply,
a great read!

March 8th, 2021 05:53

I Came Back Slowly
dusk arising said:

Lovely flowing lyrical verses.

You have me wondering. Is our reality actually seen through a dream we take with us wherever we go?

March 8th, 2021 01:59

I Came Back Slowly
FredPeyer said:

Very intriguing, well written, GotM. We do create our own reality, but where it comes from, who knows!

March 7th, 2021 22:27

Hypnotic
FredPeyer said:

Well, you did it again! A beautiful poem. It drew me in. And aren\'t we all \'a little insane\'?

February 20th, 2021 11:16

Hypnotic
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written. Good read, G.M.

February 20th, 2021 10:12

Hypnotic
dusk arising said:

It will all end in tears LOL just kidding.
Well... it\'s all there isn\'t it... in the heat of the night.....

February 20th, 2021 01:24

Burn Like the Sun
charlesbarrett said:

Great piece. Just that opening line was fantastic. I enjoyed reading this one.

December 26th, 2020 10:17

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