Comments received on poems by Goddess of the Mist
Devil Kisses
A.C Doomcraft said:
I read the poem twice, really cool concept, looking down your poem list i envy you, you are very prolific, you may just have inspired me to write today, quite the feat :) .
June 23rd, 2021 02:49
A.C Doomcraft said:
I read the poem twice, really cool concept, looking down your poem list i envy you, you are very prolific, you may just have inspired me to write today, quite the feat :) .
June 23rd, 2021 02:49
Devil Kisses
Doggerel Dave said:
Even if you were really angry, you still had much control over what you were writing.....
June 21st, 2021 01:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Even if you were really angry, you still had much control over what you were writing.....
June 21st, 2021 01:56
Evening Owl
John Prophet said:
Always loved the haunting sound of owls at night. Beautiful write.
June 15th, 2021 08:56
John Prophet said:
Always loved the haunting sound of owls at night. Beautiful write.
June 15th, 2021 08:56
Evening Owl
Doggerel Dave said:
There be plenty of wisdom and some goddessing going on with owls, so you are on target Goddess of the Mist.
And you\'ve added value in your well constructed poem.
May 30th, 2021 06:09
Doggerel Dave said:
There be plenty of wisdom and some goddessing going on with owls, so you are on target Goddess of the Mist.
And you\'ve added value in your well constructed poem.
May 30th, 2021 06:09
The Darkness
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww awesome rhyme scheme, i was admiring how words and sentences melded into the next in super style and word choice. Sensational intrigue,! Kudos!!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 6th, 2021 14:52
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woww awesome rhyme scheme, i was admiring how words and sentences melded into the next in super style and word choice. Sensational intrigue,! Kudos!!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
May 6th, 2021 14:52
Power of Your Song
L. B. Mek said:
\'All that powerful love you\'ve been singing of
all those things that you say you will do
is it all just beautiful poetry
meant to make a romantic heart blue
Still, I will lose myself in them
all those promises, strung along for so long\'..
relatable on so many levels, a great read
March 25th, 2021 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'All that powerful love you\'ve been singing of
all those things that you say you will do
is it all just beautiful poetry
meant to make a romantic heart blue
Still, I will lose myself in them
all those promises, strung along for so long\'..
relatable on so many levels, a great read
March 25th, 2021 04:58
Power of Your Song
Goldfinch60 said:
May the words within that song bring true love to you.
Andy
March 24th, 2021 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
May the words within that song bring true love to you.
Andy
March 24th, 2021 01:42
Magick of the Night
L. B. Mek said:
soothing, in its seemingly effortless flow
really well executed
thanks for sharing dear poet
March 15th, 2021 07:19
L. B. Mek said:
soothing, in its seemingly effortless flow
really well executed
thanks for sharing dear poet
March 15th, 2021 07:19
Magick of the Night
SunSearcher said:
I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing.
~SS
March 15th, 2021 05:49
SunSearcher said:
I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing.
~SS
March 15th, 2021 05:49
Magick of the Night
Doggerel Dave said:
Very picture laden, rhythmic , easy to read - enjoyed very much.
Forgive me for asking, Goddess of the Mist: is this in any sense autobiographical?
March 14th, 2021 23:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Very picture laden, rhythmic , easy to read - enjoyed very much.
Forgive me for asking, Goddess of the Mist: is this in any sense autobiographical?
March 14th, 2021 23:51
I Came Back Slowly
Doggerel Dave said:
Perception - never seen it discussed lyrically before, and that will be OK if I never see it again - this will do for me!
March 8th, 2021 06:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Perception - never seen it discussed lyrically before, and that will be OK if I never see it again - this will do for me!
March 8th, 2021 06:42
I Came Back Slowly
L. B. Mek said:
poignant last line!
\'between all the chaos of circumstance and the unfathomably accumulated \'good lucks\' that impacts a life,
exactly what role does choice
and intent of purposed \'will\', play
are we the true architects of consequence or destiny, or is reality our contrasting - construct of orderly comprehension
for this insanity we dwell in..\'
a wonderful write, challenging in depth of scope and complexity of topic dear poet, thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply,
a great read!
March 8th, 2021 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
poignant last line!
\'between all the chaos of circumstance and the unfathomably accumulated \'good lucks\' that impacts a life,
exactly what role does choice
and intent of purposed \'will\', play
are we the true architects of consequence or destiny, or is reality our contrasting - construct of orderly comprehension
for this insanity we dwell in..\'
a wonderful write, challenging in depth of scope and complexity of topic dear poet, thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply,
a great read!
March 8th, 2021 05:53
I Came Back Slowly
dusk arising said:
Lovely flowing lyrical verses.
You have me wondering. Is our reality actually seen through a dream we take with us wherever we go?
March 8th, 2021 01:59
dusk arising said:
Lovely flowing lyrical verses.
You have me wondering. Is our reality actually seen through a dream we take with us wherever we go?
March 8th, 2021 01:59
I Came Back Slowly
FredPeyer said:
Very intriguing, well written, GotM. We do create our own reality, but where it comes from, who knows!
March 7th, 2021 22:27
FredPeyer said:
Very intriguing, well written, GotM. We do create our own reality, but where it comes from, who knows!
March 7th, 2021 22:27
Hypnotic
FredPeyer said:
Well, you did it again! A beautiful poem. It drew me in. And aren\'t we all \'a little insane\'?
February 20th, 2021 11:16
FredPeyer said:
Well, you did it again! A beautiful poem. It drew me in. And aren\'t we all \'a little insane\'?
February 20th, 2021 11:16
Hypnotic
dusk arising said:
It will all end in tears LOL just kidding.
Well... it\'s all there isn\'t it... in the heat of the night.....
February 20th, 2021 01:24
dusk arising said:
It will all end in tears LOL just kidding.
Well... it\'s all there isn\'t it... in the heat of the night.....
February 20th, 2021 01:24
Burn Like the Sun
charlesbarrett said:
Great piece. Just that opening line was fantastic. I enjoyed reading this one.
December 26th, 2020 10:17
charlesbarrett said:
Great piece. Just that opening line was fantastic. I enjoyed reading this one.
December 26th, 2020 10:17
Her Ride
jarcher54 said:
I\'ve known a few gals with a hint of petrol in their hair but never put \"gasoline perfume\" together. Without the picture, this sounds like one of them!
\"Gasoline perfume\" lol. Bon mot!
December 23rd, 2020 01:24
jarcher54 said:
I\'ve known a few gals with a hint of petrol in their hair but never put \"gasoline perfume\" together. Without the picture, this sounds like one of them!
\"Gasoline perfume\" lol. Bon mot!
December 23rd, 2020 01:24
Burn Like the Sun
Clara said:
I agree with the above comment. I had to read it twice before it sunk it and it\'s actually rather brilliant what you have done here. It\'s very clever. A great piece! Thanks for sharing!
December 21st, 2020 15:29
Clara said:
I agree with the above comment. I had to read it twice before it sunk it and it\'s actually rather brilliant what you have done here. It\'s very clever. A great piece! Thanks for sharing!
December 21st, 2020 15:29
Her Ride
FredPeyer said:
Am so glad I came across your Haiku. Incredible picture, beautiful words!
December 20th, 2020 11:49
FredPeyer said:
Am so glad I came across your Haiku. Incredible picture, beautiful words!
December 20th, 2020 11:49
Burn Like the Sun
jarcher54 said:
On first reading this seemed almost impenetrable. On second reading it came into focus so sharply I almost gasped. You\'ve imagined what it is to have your soul held hostage. To be so sure of oneself, to see so many traitors and invaders. To bow to your firearm like a samurai to his feudal lord. You gave me goosebumps, and food for thought.
December 20th, 2020 02:53
jarcher54 said:
On first reading this seemed almost impenetrable. On second reading it came into focus so sharply I almost gasped. You\'ve imagined what it is to have your soul held hostage. To be so sure of oneself, to see so many traitors and invaders. To bow to your firearm like a samurai to his feudal lord. You gave me goosebumps, and food for thought.
December 20th, 2020 02:53
Moonshine Cherries
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I like reading these verses out loud - what I usually do with poetry.
If you don\'t always want to use MyPoeticSide\'s default middle-axis line justification, it\'s possible to work around it, though it\'s a challenge. Look at my verses to see what you can do with the WordPress text editor - a lot.
December 19th, 2020 23:28
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
I like reading these verses out loud - what I usually do with poetry.
If you don\'t always want to use MyPoeticSide\'s default middle-axis line justification, it\'s possible to work around it, though it\'s a challenge. Look at my verses to see what you can do with the WordPress text editor - a lot.
December 19th, 2020 23:28
Gypsy Blood
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
A lot of Roma (their usual endonym) object to the word Gypsy, and its equivalent Cigane in most other European languages. (A few say, oh, we\'re called Gypsies in English.) The few I\'ve met call themselves Roma, and that\'s the term a Facebook friend of mine uses - he speaks about 30 languages, has learned Romani, and has translated some Romani poetry into English.
Angela, as you know, Spanish Roma are a pretty different bunch.
I just learned that the Spanish obscenity \'chingar\' is a loan from Romani.
Roma dukker (practice divination) for the gajo (non-Roma), but I think they don\'t do it among themselves.
December 19th, 2020 23:23
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
A lot of Roma (their usual endonym) object to the word Gypsy, and its equivalent Cigane in most other European languages. (A few say, oh, we\'re called Gypsies in English.) The few I\'ve met call themselves Roma, and that\'s the term a Facebook friend of mine uses - he speaks about 30 languages, has learned Romani, and has translated some Romani poetry into English.
Angela, as you know, Spanish Roma are a pretty different bunch.
I just learned that the Spanish obscenity \'chingar\' is a loan from Romani.
Roma dukker (practice divination) for the gajo (non-Roma), but I think they don\'t do it among themselves.
December 19th, 2020 23:23
Hey You
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... As I hit a rock in my second marriage, I\'ll heed your words!
Thank you much for sharing and what a wonderful flow, letting go of the emotions to heal the soul...
I\'ll wipe my tears have my last smoke, absorbing your words for a better tomorrow or preferably now!
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
November 25th, 2020 23:54
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... As I hit a rock in my second marriage, I\'ll heed your words!
Thank you much for sharing and what a wonderful flow, letting go of the emotions to heal the soul...
I\'ll wipe my tears have my last smoke, absorbing your words for a better tomorrow or preferably now!
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
November 25th, 2020 23:54
Her Ride
L. B. Mek said:
is these your take on the antithesis of a Nature Haiku? lol
fun read
November 13th, 2020 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
is these your take on the antithesis of a Nature Haiku? lol
fun read
November 13th, 2020 05:15
The Mist
AuburnScribbler said:
Obviously, because of your name, I had to read this one first.
A wonderfully written and a beautifully immersive poem here, and the lines of dialogue at the end; made me smile.
Brilliant work, have a good one and please do take care.
November 13th, 2020 03:07
AuburnScribbler said:
Obviously, because of your name, I had to read this one first.
A wonderfully written and a beautifully immersive poem here, and the lines of dialogue at the end; made me smile.
Brilliant work, have a good one and please do take care.
November 13th, 2020 03:07
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