Comments received on poems by CindyB
Believe
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve never wanted a flow like that to keep going on! Thank you so much for such a beautiful deep expression of emotions
March 23rd, 2021 17:43
Poetic Dan said:
I\'ve never wanted a flow like that to keep going on! Thank you so much for such a beautiful deep expression of emotions
March 23rd, 2021 17:43
In The Valley
orchidee said:
Seems really suitable for the current Corona crisis - the valley metaphor - whether you wrote it particularly relating to that, or not?
April 11th, 2020 02:28
orchidee said:
Seems really suitable for the current Corona crisis - the valley metaphor - whether you wrote it particularly relating to that, or not?
April 11th, 2020 02:28
Between Words
Heather T said:
Every line is gorgeously spilled, rendered with a feather of sensitivity that can\'t be learned. You are a poet\'s poet and I am an immediate fan.
January 9th, 2020 23:46
Heather T said:
Every line is gorgeously spilled, rendered with a feather of sensitivity that can\'t be learned. You are a poet\'s poet and I am an immediate fan.
January 9th, 2020 23:46
Something Beautiful
kevin browne said:
Well, there is something beautiful about you and I\'m guessing it\'s your pen. A mirage of such thrilling words compliled perfectly and fitting in a beautiful order about for all about us...
November 2nd, 2019 03:08
kevin browne said:
Well, there is something beautiful about you and I\'m guessing it\'s your pen. A mirage of such thrilling words compliled perfectly and fitting in a beautiful order about for all about us...
November 2nd, 2019 03:08
We Do Not Bow
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent imagery Cindy - -- we are made from the stuff of stars and you tell this so very well. First class read and going straight into my favourites.
October 8th, 2019 03:53
Fay Slimm. said:
Excellent imagery Cindy - -- we are made from the stuff of stars and you tell this so very well. First class read and going straight into my favourites.
October 8th, 2019 03:53
A Name That Pleases
FredPeyer said:
You really do have a way with words, Cindy. Especially like \"Galaxies between your words\". If we could only read between the lines....
October 8th, 2019 03:51
FredPeyer said:
You really do have a way with words, Cindy. Especially like \"Galaxies between your words\". If we could only read between the lines....
October 8th, 2019 03:51
We Do Not Bow
FredPeyer said:
Cindy, I love your poem. Love that line \"We have always been more\", and are and will be!
Great writing, beautiful metaphors.
October 8th, 2019 03:46
FredPeyer said:
Cindy, I love your poem. Love that line \"We have always been more\", and are and will be!
Great writing, beautiful metaphors.
October 8th, 2019 03:46
Bells at Midnight
kevin browne said:
Brilliantly penned and expressed in delight of your worthy words. I shall remember this one for a while to come. Thank you for your work done here...
September 26th, 2019 01:16
kevin browne said:
Brilliantly penned and expressed in delight of your worthy words. I shall remember this one for a while to come. Thank you for your work done here...
September 26th, 2019 01:16
Midnight Ride
FredPeyer said:
Great writing Cindy! A midnight ride to nowhere indeed.
September 20th, 2019 00:36
FredPeyer said:
Great writing Cindy! A midnight ride to nowhere indeed.
September 20th, 2019 00:36
The Things We Keep
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I have to agree with Neville - - - these lines are wrought with a poetic mind and talent that is most refreshing - saved to my favourities and keep writing Cindy
September 19th, 2019 07:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - I have to agree with Neville - - - these lines are wrought with a poetic mind and talent that is most refreshing - saved to my favourities and keep writing Cindy
September 19th, 2019 07:56
The Things We Keep
Neville said:
what a little gem you have crafted and shared here on MPS... delightful,
Neville
September 19th, 2019 07:50
Neville said:
what a little gem you have crafted and shared here on MPS... delightful,
Neville
September 19th, 2019 07:50
Settle Down Dark
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing read Cindy - - you have such a way of grabbing attention with first line impact and never leaving the draw toward metaphor right to a finalé - -- top drawer writing my friend.
September 17th, 2019 08:00
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing read Cindy - - you have such a way of grabbing attention with first line impact and never leaving the draw toward metaphor right to a finalé - -- top drawer writing my friend.
September 17th, 2019 08:00
Pure
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing CINDY ! We all strive to be PURE and ABSOLVED - but it always requires REPENTANCE and feeling sorry for our actions & their consequences ! The bigger problem is keeping PURE - AMEN !
Blessings Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check my POEM
Lifes Waterfall - THANKS
September 16th, 2019 18:04
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing CINDY ! We all strive to be PURE and ABSOLVED - but it always requires REPENTANCE and feeling sorry for our actions & their consequences ! The bigger problem is keeping PURE - AMEN !
Blessings Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check my POEM
Lifes Waterfall - THANKS
September 16th, 2019 18:04
Until All The Lights Are Gone
Neville said:
Another resounding poetic success.. at least it is in my book... Hope you start to get the attention and credit you so obviously deserve........
Neville
September 16th, 2019 13:20
Neville said:
Another resounding poetic success.. at least it is in my book... Hope you start to get the attention and credit you so obviously deserve........
Neville
September 16th, 2019 13:20
Electric Everywhere
Neville said:
A compelling read once started, just had to see it through... very much enjoyed..... Neville
September 16th, 2019 13:17
Neville said:
A compelling read once started, just had to see it through... very much enjoyed..... Neville
September 16th, 2019 13:17
Until All The Lights Are Gone
Fay Slimm. said:
A bouquet of phrasing like I never read before - your talent for capturing the essence of reshaping by tracing out patterns and hanging in there is simply amazing.......... well done again Cindy,.......... looking forward to reading more of your work.
September 16th, 2019 11:04
Fay Slimm. said:
A bouquet of phrasing like I never read before - your talent for capturing the essence of reshaping by tracing out patterns and hanging in there is simply amazing.......... well done again Cindy,.......... looking forward to reading more of your work.
September 16th, 2019 11:04
Pure
Fay Slimm. said:
Cindy - how have I missed your postings until now - after having read and re-read this gem of a verse I just have to search for more of your work - - a poet\'s poem that weaves words around romance and sets my skin atingle - first class writing my friend - and saved to my favourites
September 16th, 2019 10:59
Fay Slimm. said:
Cindy - how have I missed your postings until now - after having read and re-read this gem of a verse I just have to search for more of your work - - a poet\'s poem that weaves words around romance and sets my skin atingle - first class writing my friend - and saved to my favourites
September 16th, 2019 10:59
Sing
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this tribute to victorious love - must read this one over and over again and thank you Cindy - - am putting its message into my favourites.
June 23rd, 2019 12:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this tribute to victorious love - must read this one over and over again and thank you Cindy - - am putting its message into my favourites.
June 23rd, 2019 12:01
Bravely
Fay Slimm. said:
Another gem of poetic expertise - a superb write Cindy.
June 21st, 2019 03:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Another gem of poetic expertise - a superb write Cindy.
June 21st, 2019 03:51
Free Men
dusk arising said:
What an incredible tapestry of mystery you have embroidered into the night time\'s ride of fantasy.
Exquisite. I would love to read more like this, perhaps as a part of an ongoing theme or story.
June 17th, 2019 10:29
dusk arising said:
What an incredible tapestry of mystery you have embroidered into the night time\'s ride of fantasy.
Exquisite. I would love to read more like this, perhaps as a part of an ongoing theme or story.
June 17th, 2019 10:29
Telegraph Road
kevin browne said:
The honesty in your wisdom kneels down beside you at your alter and a reflection of spirit shows within us our transient and mundane lives, Doing the chores on a daily basis only reminds us what we are missing. Allow time for thoughts to take place and correct them if you feel there\'re right or wrong. It leaves me wondering about Telegraph Road though and its obvious enough to notice something is hidden. Maybe or maybe not of its relevance within this lovely, thought provoking piece and I\'ll stand right beside you if you want me too?
June 15th, 2019 11:26
kevin browne said:
The honesty in your wisdom kneels down beside you at your alter and a reflection of spirit shows within us our transient and mundane lives, Doing the chores on a daily basis only reminds us what we are missing. Allow time for thoughts to take place and correct them if you feel there\'re right or wrong. It leaves me wondering about Telegraph Road though and its obvious enough to notice something is hidden. Maybe or maybe not of its relevance within this lovely, thought provoking piece and I\'ll stand right beside you if you want me too?
June 15th, 2019 11:26
Saved
Fay Slimm. said:
A poet\'s poem that touches the imaginative by use of metaphor and makes readers want more - thank you Cindy for this little gem which goes into my favourites.
June 13th, 2019 02:08
Fay Slimm. said:
A poet\'s poem that touches the imaginative by use of metaphor and makes readers want more - thank you Cindy for this little gem which goes into my favourites.
June 13th, 2019 02:08
Ghost of You
Fay Slimm. said:
Your writing has that something so special Cindy - this haunting lament aptly captures the pain of loss and of waiting in silence for comfort....... a compelling read and one for my favourites.
June 9th, 2019 01:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Your writing has that something so special Cindy - this haunting lament aptly captures the pain of loss and of waiting in silence for comfort....... a compelling read and one for my favourites.
June 9th, 2019 01:42
Grace
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON CINDY ~ A belated welcome from US to MPS ! Angela is my Fiancee (currently in New Zealand) I am in South UK. I (BRIAN) apologise that you have not received more comments ! MPS functions by reading & commenting on each others Poems ! I like your poems and they are rather MYSTICAL !
SRTUCTURE: 15 Lines of continuous Free Verse throbbing with Rhythm and intriguing to recite ! It divides (by content & punctuation) into three Quatrains & a Triplet !
SUBJECT : Lines 1 - 4 ~ A starry starry night and an admission that you can be *broken* ! Lines 5 - 8 ~ A desire to be cured ~ but at what price ? Lines 9 - 12 Our Dreams take us back to Fantasy ~ We wake in reality ? Lines 13 - 15 ~ Scared ? We come down to Earth ~ cross the line and GRACE is exalted !
I apoligise for the paucity of my analysis ~ BUT if you like it I will look at more !
PEACE & GRACE
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 7th, 2019 11:36
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD AFTERNOON CINDY ~ A belated welcome from US to MPS ! Angela is my Fiancee (currently in New Zealand) I am in South UK. I (BRIAN) apologise that you have not received more comments ! MPS functions by reading & commenting on each others Poems ! I like your poems and they are rather MYSTICAL !
SRTUCTURE: 15 Lines of continuous Free Verse throbbing with Rhythm and intriguing to recite ! It divides (by content & punctuation) into three Quatrains & a Triplet !
SUBJECT : Lines 1 - 4 ~ A starry starry night and an admission that you can be *broken* ! Lines 5 - 8 ~ A desire to be cured ~ but at what price ? Lines 9 - 12 Our Dreams take us back to Fantasy ~ We wake in reality ? Lines 13 - 15 ~ Scared ? We come down to Earth ~ cross the line and GRACE is exalted !
I apoligise for the paucity of my analysis ~ BUT if you like it I will look at more !
PEACE & GRACE
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 7th, 2019 11:36
Stay
Neville said:
yes indeed, a fine poem and much enjoyed... just crying out to be read it seems...
Neville
June 3rd, 2019 06:07
Neville said:
yes indeed, a fine poem and much enjoyed... just crying out to be read it seems...
Neville
June 3rd, 2019 06:07
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