Comments received on poems by CindyB
Stay
Fay Slimm. said:
A linguistic medley of well-worded lines which you shape into such an appealing invitation - - a beguiling read again Cindy.
June 3rd, 2019 05:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A linguistic medley of well-worded lines which you shape into such an appealing invitation - - a beguiling read again Cindy.
June 3rd, 2019 05:29
Snakeskin Shine
Goddess of the Mist said:
Wow, this is powerful! I know something\'s good when I get chills - and I got chills reading this! Nice job!!
June 2nd, 2019 14:27
Goddess of the Mist said:
Wow, this is powerful! I know something\'s good when I get chills - and I got chills reading this! Nice job!!
June 2nd, 2019 14:27
Snakeskin Shine
SerenWise said:
I really like this, very good use of metaphor and this piece really has a rush to it. Good write!
June 2nd, 2019 12:50
SerenWise said:
I really like this, very good use of metaphor and this piece really has a rush to it. Good write!
June 2nd, 2019 12:50
In Dreams
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing piece of poetry Candy - I must read this one repeatedly for the emotive content and its presentation - - a delight of a read. Saved to my favourites.
June 1st, 2019 00:55
Fay Slimm. said:
An amazing piece of poetry Candy - I must read this one repeatedly for the emotive content and its presentation - - a delight of a read. Saved to my favourites.
June 1st, 2019 00:55
Marrow Deep
Fay Slimm. said:
So sensuous the read ignites feelings deeper than marrow - you draw my attention in every line in this sizzling love affair that must be kept clandestine.
May 30th, 2019 12:49
Fay Slimm. said:
So sensuous the read ignites feelings deeper than marrow - you draw my attention in every line in this sizzling love affair that must be kept clandestine.
May 30th, 2019 12:49
Stars
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Cindy with the beguiling read - I could feel the pull of that silence. First rate writing.
May 30th, 2019 07:52
Fay Slimm. said:
Welcome back Cindy with the beguiling read - I could feel the pull of that silence. First rate writing.
May 30th, 2019 07:52
Requiem
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING CINDY ~ It happens when we revsit our Childhood Environment ! All we can say is:
Let us Pray ~ Rest for Eternity
In perpetual light ~ Resting in Peace ~ AMEN
Dark Buildings ~ evidence of an Accident (and Death) ! Home of ones Childhood ~ empy & desolate ~
no signs of LIFE !
Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK).
Please check todays POEM ~ Thanks B & A !
February 6th, 2019 17:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING CINDY ~ It happens when we revsit our Childhood Environment ! All we can say is:
Let us Pray ~ Rest for Eternity
In perpetual light ~ Resting in Peace ~ AMEN
Dark Buildings ~ evidence of an Accident (and Death) ! Home of ones Childhood ~ empy & desolate ~
no signs of LIFE !
Thanks for caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK).
Please check todays POEM ~ Thanks B & A !
February 6th, 2019 17:26
The Hunter
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing CINDY
Inspiration from the Constellation
ORION was indeed the mighty Hunter
In the moonlight all mystery is revealed
All that is hidden & secret comes to light !
We are in awe of Nature ~ aware of
The MAJESTY of the night Sky and we
Celebrate ORION THE HUNTER ~ AMEN !
Yours in appreciation ANGELA & BRIAN !
Please check our site ~ Thanks A & B !
February 5th, 2019 15:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing CINDY
Inspiration from the Constellation
ORION was indeed the mighty Hunter
In the moonlight all mystery is revealed
All that is hidden & secret comes to light !
We are in awe of Nature ~ aware of
The MAJESTY of the night Sky and we
Celebrate ORION THE HUNTER ~ AMEN !
Yours in appreciation ANGELA & BRIAN !
Please check our site ~ Thanks A & B !
February 5th, 2019 15:45
The Hunter
Fay Slimm. said:
A mysterious feel in every line of this intriguing write Cindy - - a haunt of a read.
February 5th, 2019 07:16
Fay Slimm. said:
A mysterious feel in every line of this intriguing write Cindy - - a haunt of a read.
February 5th, 2019 07:16
The Hunter
SerenWise said:
This is beautifully written! Well done on the rhyming :)
February 5th, 2019 00:29
SerenWise said:
This is beautifully written! Well done on the rhyming :)
February 5th, 2019 00:29
Temple of Moon
Caleb.A said:
Beautiful, I love this piece! “We only dance when there’s no one around” - tis true, only alone can we be ourselves at times.
“Love can not save us from fate”
“Let something come from nothing”
February 4th, 2019 18:30
Caleb.A said:
Beautiful, I love this piece! “We only dance when there’s no one around” - tis true, only alone can we be ourselves at times.
“Love can not save us from fate”
“Let something come from nothing”
February 4th, 2019 18:30
Something Rises
Fay Slimm. said:
The form and line-length add their own pace to this intriguing write Cindy which catches its breath in a zealous finalé and makes me want to read it again. First class writing - I look forward to reading more of your work.
February 4th, 2019 03:51
Fay Slimm. said:
The form and line-length add their own pace to this intriguing write Cindy which catches its breath in a zealous finalé and makes me want to read it again. First class writing - I look forward to reading more of your work.
February 4th, 2019 03:51
The Miracle
orchidee said:
A fine write Cindy. Erm, I did not breathe for 24 hours one day. I didn\'t feel very well after it. Strange that! heehee.
February 3rd, 2019 03:08
orchidee said:
A fine write Cindy. Erm, I did not breathe for 24 hours one day. I didn\'t feel very well after it. Strange that! heehee.
February 3rd, 2019 03:08
Temple of Moon
Neville said:
Welcome to MPS.. your first post was thoroughly enjoyed, may there be many more... All Good Things....
February 1st, 2019 01:03
Neville said:
Welcome to MPS.. your first post was thoroughly enjoyed, may there be many more... All Good Things....
February 1st, 2019 01:03
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