Comments received on poems by Amherrera1190



Dark stranger
SerenWise said:

Love this piece, great ending!

April 7th, 2019 17:40

Your daughter too
Amherrera1190 said:

Thank you my friend

March 27th, 2019 23:38

Your daughter too
dusk arising said:

Hmm, much hurt and anger here shows through the contradictions.

March 27th, 2019 05:18

A Monster Of The Worst Variety
Amherrera1190 said:

Thank you all! I just think so many can relate to this but feel alone. So i just wanted to let others know it happens more than they think.

March 11th, 2019 18:33

A Monster Of The Worst Variety
EliDagger said:

You reached into my mind with this piece, I can to relate to it so much. Amazing way of putting emotions into words!

March 11th, 2019 16:00

A Monster Of The Worst Variety
orchidee said:

Doh, I know! People say I push them to the edge of sanity. But I was only singing to them. Then they said the same words as the title/last line of your poem to me - monstrous singing. heehee.

March 11th, 2019 04:02

A Monster Of The Worst Variety
JaydeVictoria said:

Very powerful write. The ending was superbly done, saved to read again x

March 11th, 2019 03:50

You2015
dusk arising said:

All about physical attraction which isn\'t really what keeps people together. There will always be a prettier flower to pick.

March 6th, 2019 06:48

Mirrors
sylviasearcher said:

The mirror is both a gateway and a prison, depending upon the reflection you perceive.



March 4th, 2019 02:58

Mirrors
Neville said:

I am fascinated by the secrets mirrors hold... and I enjoyed this tribute to them..... Neville

March 4th, 2019 01:54

Venom
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great honest piece I hope it help to shre difficult subject thanks for sharing

February 23rd, 2019 03:34

Venom
SerenWise said:

Beautiful and emotive prose

February 22nd, 2019 15:46

Phantoms
dusk arising said:

Remain fond of them, they\'re jewels in your memory. This is you moving on. Better things lay ahead.

February 21st, 2019 01:57

2am
laurenroe said:

What a beautiful collage of words. Wonderfully put!

February 20th, 2019 13:25

Love music
DannyBoi said:

Good to see a happy poem on this site. It is very nice to read

February 19th, 2019 17:49

Locusts
SerenWise said:

This is great, I love the metaphor

February 13th, 2019 19:09

Locusts
dusk arising said:

You cannot be serious. Surely you dont have such a low opinion of yourself. Look at the positives in you. Things which nobody will EVER be able to take from you. Be the beautiful individual that you are. Or are you just a husk? No way!

February 13th, 2019 14:16

Locusts
JaydeVictoria said:

Wow really emotive and resonates with me. Thanks so much for sharing ...x

February 13th, 2019 14:02

Those Nights
JaydeVictoria said:

I really enjoyed this, reminded me of someone I know and the nights I used to sit up thinking about them.
Nice write..x

February 13th, 2019 09:03

Those Nights
SerenWise said:

Nicely written prose

February 12th, 2019 15:43

Those Nights
Netashi said:

Very nicely written, having memories of someone is nice some people feel sad when recalling but its better to have memories of someone than none at all. Welcome to MPS i hope you enjoy your stay.Keep up the good work.
- T

February 12th, 2019 13:49