Comments received on poems by laurenroe



seven years
Amherrera1190 said:

It is very hard thing to bring out and talk about child truama. From experience i know its always in tbe back of your mind. I hope that writing helps you gain closure and start healing.excellent write 🖤🖤✌🖤

March 1st, 2019 10:12

seven years
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Well done Lauren
Keep strong and let the light in a little more every day
Remember you are a miracle
Here, you are amongst kindred souls
Well writtten piece and another little step to peace I hope

February 22nd, 2019 13:44

seven years
MendedFences27 said:

They say \"Time heals all\" , it\'s not entirely true, but as time passes the pain diminishes. Believe, that if you survived this, you are a powerhouse . A strong woman who will survive whatever comes her way. Bravo to you for your courage.
You have written an excellent poem, that delivers the agony to the reader. Great stuff. - Phil A.

February 21st, 2019 20:35

seven years
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI LAUREN ~ ANGELA HERE : Seven years is a difinitive period : to escape from the past and begin anew ! I know from experience as a Physiotherapist & Church Councellor (for Young Ladies who have suffered traumas & abuse etc) that the past can be massaged away : prayed for and reduced by love & TLC ! But as you rightly say : a fraction always remains ! However the experience does make you stronger and better able to cope with \"predators\" in the future. Thanks for sharing I know it is cathartic ; and the loving & positive responses you have received will also help : AMEN !
Thinking of you : Praying for you
Blessings & 🧡 in the Spirit : ANGELA

February 21st, 2019 18:34

seven years
Angela1711 said:

These poem brought tears to my eye\'s. You have great strength be proud of all you have over come and stand tall. Much love xx

February 21st, 2019 15:20

seven years
Neville said:

Despite the traumatic and dark inspiration behind these words, this a a great poem my friend and was simply crying out to be written.... Best Regards & All Good Things, Neville

February 21st, 2019 12:44

seven years
tepo said:

Excellent
You are dealing with this very well
Getting it out means no secret
No misplaced shame or guilt
Respect

February 21st, 2019 12:43

i cant feel anymore
D. K. Heqet said:

This is sadly fantastic. I hope you’re okay, but maybe it’s in your sadness that ignites your creativity - giving you strength. Good for you, keep it up!

February 21st, 2019 12:40

i cant feel anymore
Goldfinch60 said:

The words that you write show that there are feelings within you. As with many on this site feelings increase the more you write. Keep up the good work laurenroe.
Welcome to MPS.

February 21st, 2019 01:48

i cant feel anymore
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

WELCOME LAUREN ~ Thanks for your first Poem. You will like it here MPS is a very empathetic site ~ you have already recieved some nice replies ! MPS works by reading and commenting on each others poems ~ thanks for commenting on ours ~ Angela is my FIANCEE !
I can empathise with your Poem ad (before I met Angela) my feelings ebbed & flowed like the tide ~ feelings are very transient ! Every Blessings ~ Yours through Poetry BRIAN.


February 20th, 2019 17:37

i cant feel anymore
dusk arising said:

Lovely \'feelings\' writing poet. I often wonder whether i am writing poetry or self healing. It\'s good to let your heart and feelings speak out here. We have poets eyes and ears.
Keep writing... more please.

February 20th, 2019 16:42

i cant feel anymore
tepo said:

Welcome
Superb debut
Keep writing it out
And keep breathing
It will come in waves
Does get better

February 20th, 2019 12:34

i cant feel anymore
sylviasearcher said:

I think you captured your feeling or unfeeling really well.
Writing is like my therapy.
Hope spring springs hope ⭐️

February 20th, 2019 05:52

i cant feel anymore
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Not much to say??
I think you explained your feelings very well indeed L
Great write
Did it help?

February 20th, 2019 05:16