Boo Radley
FineB said:

Hello Paloma,

A wonderful poem capturing the essence of Boo Radley.

Keep writing FineB

June 7th, 2019 02:55

Love’s little pheonix
Fay Slimm. said:

Welcome indeed with this stunning free-verse piece of fine poetry .Some fantastic use of metaphor here.

March 21st, 2019 16:49

Love’s little pheonix
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

WELCOME PALOMITA (Little Dove or Popcorn ?) : Thanks for your first Poem ! Elegant in meter & message ! 12 balanced free verse lines !
In my experience the effect of Love : is indeed like a Pheonix : warm & overpowering ! Love does expose us and leaves us barren. Begging Love to stop has no effect because Pheonix persists until his job is done and we are consumed. I share this site wit Brian my Fiancee and in essence we are mutually consumed by Love !
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Blessings & Peace
ANGELA 🧡

March 21st, 2019 16:23