No title
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

WELCOME DAISYBELLE ~ Thanks for your first Poem. It is interesting in both its form & content. Nineteen lines of free verse (unrhymed) nice shape because you have centered it also (because of the length of the lines) it has rhythm ~ which makes it readable and (in the right circles) recitable ~ it is a POEM. To me it seems to be about a somewhat chaotic relationship !
I like the style in which it is written ~ continuous lines (no verses) of free verse Poetry ~ centered to give it shape. I would have liked the Subject of the Poem (what it is about !) to have been less obscure ~ but perhaps this was intentional ? More poems Please !
Yours BRIAN (UK) ~ ANGELA is on Work Exchange in NEW ZEALAND.
Please check our site. MPS works by Reading & Commenting ~
on each others Poems ~ I share this site with my Fiancee ~ ANGELA.

April 6th, 2019 18:10