Comments received on poems by JJ1
My monsters
dusk arising said:
Hi and welcome to the \"We all have monsters too\" club here in MPS. Yes it\'s true, so many of us find a great release in poetry.
Great first piece from you. Please feel free to comment upon any of the poetry you see published on here because that\'s the way this site works at its best.
April 22nd, 2019 18:27
dusk arising said:
Hi and welcome to the \"We all have monsters too\" club here in MPS. Yes it\'s true, so many of us find a great release in poetry.
Great first piece from you. Please feel free to comment upon any of the poetry you see published on here because that\'s the way this site works at its best.
April 22nd, 2019 18:27
My monsters
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS JJ ~ For a very well structured Poem ~ six balanced doublets
in a Verse Pattern (Ab Ac Ad Ae Af Ag).
Repetition is very important in Poetry ........
Especially of the TITLE for reinforcement.
Each DOUBLET introduces another aspect of
Your Inner Monsters : Unrelenting ~ Threatening ~ Clawing ~
Taking over ~ Waiting (til YOU stop fighting !) it builds to a CLIMAX
YOU are afraid you are LOSING ............................... !
It is an elegant description of how People battle with
THEIR INNER MONSTERS : Thanks for sharing !
A very good first Poem as presented !
Yours through Poetry : ANGELA
Please check our site : Thanks.
April 22nd, 2019 14:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS JJ ~ For a very well structured Poem ~ six balanced doublets
in a Verse Pattern (Ab Ac Ad Ae Af Ag).
Repetition is very important in Poetry ........
Especially of the TITLE for reinforcement.
Each DOUBLET introduces another aspect of
Your Inner Monsters : Unrelenting ~ Threatening ~ Clawing ~
Taking over ~ Waiting (til YOU stop fighting !) it builds to a CLIMAX
YOU are afraid you are LOSING ............................... !
It is an elegant description of how People battle with
THEIR INNER MONSTERS : Thanks for sharing !
A very good first Poem as presented !
Yours through Poetry : ANGELA
Please check our site : Thanks.
April 22nd, 2019 14:41
