Comments received on poems by wholeheart97
My Problem.
dusk arising said:
Emotional stuff. Do you think this situation will get any better? I\'m assuming you don\'t.
So the best thing to do is make a change. Change something which you are in control of. Take control of your life and get rid of him.... or remain a doormat... for ever.
Careful when changing from third person to first person in a poem.
May 20th, 2019 08:31
dusk arising said:
Emotional stuff. Do you think this situation will get any better? I\'m assuming you don\'t.
So the best thing to do is make a change. Change something which you are in control of. Take control of your life and get rid of him.... or remain a doormat... for ever.
Careful when changing from third person to first person in a poem.
May 20th, 2019 08:31
My Problem.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write but I feel that he is using you, from your words you obviously deserve better and believe me better is out there waiting for you.
Welcome to MPS.
May 20th, 2019 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write but I feel that he is using you, from your words you obviously deserve better and believe me better is out there waiting for you.
Welcome to MPS.
May 20th, 2019 01:13
