Comments received on poems by Anymo
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME ANYMO ~ Thanks for your First poem ~ well presented in terms of Rhyme & Rhythm ! The subject ZOMBIES (UNDEAD !) is also well presanted ! Introduced in Verse 1 Scared in V 2. The presence in V 3. Apity to be scared ? V 4. Death of Glory in V 5. and in V 6. The inevitability of the UNDEAD ! Thanks for scaring ! This is a good Poem ~ sorry you didnt get more comments. Plea reaad & comment on OTHER MEMBERS Poems ~ and they will comment on yours ~ OK !
Your Friend in Poetry ANGELA & BRIAN !
June 6th, 2019 14:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME ANYMO ~ Thanks for your First poem ~ well presented in terms of Rhyme & Rhythm ! The subject ZOMBIES (UNDEAD !) is also well presanted ! Introduced in Verse 1 Scared in V 2. The presence in V 3. Apity to be scared ? V 4. Death of Glory in V 5. and in V 6. The inevitability of the UNDEAD ! Thanks for scaring ! This is a good Poem ~ sorry you didnt get more comments. Plea reaad & comment on OTHER MEMBERS Poems ~ and they will comment on yours ~ OK !
Your Friend in Poetry ANGELA & BRIAN !
June 6th, 2019 14:34
