Comments received on poems by dls2012

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dusk arising said:

Welcome to MPS. We are all kinds of poets. Some seem to have to write daily, others (like me) write when the inspiration happens.
This site works best when we comment upon each others pieces and i welcome you to comment upon mine.

Your first piece shows straight away you are no clumsy novice in poetic art. An excellent introduction to your ability and intent.... of course I for one will be waiting to see more... please.

June 15th, 2019 21:00

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Welcome DLS ~ thanks for your first POEM ! Very well written and replete with Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Reason ! WE (we are an engaged couple) look forward to your next one ! MPS opperates by reading & commenting on each others Poems and replying to comments ! Please check our SITE ~ OK

Yours through Poetry ~ ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡

June 15th, 2019 19:19