Comments received on poems by Heather Hoffman
Forever Tears
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but that erosion will cease and life will be wonderful. All life is wonderful as you are alive.
July 9th, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but that erosion will cease and life will be wonderful. All life is wonderful as you are alive.
July 9th, 2019 00:56
Something Terminal
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words written by those in pain are so cathartic but words, like yours, can help us find a better place in our lives without having to suffer.
Welcome to MPS.
July 8th, 2019 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words written by those in pain are so cathartic but words, like yours, can help us find a better place in our lives without having to suffer.
Welcome to MPS.
July 8th, 2019 00:19
Something Terminal
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME HEATHER ~ Brian here ~ thanks for your first POEM ! It is very elegant ! Firstly it has Metre (22 line of Blank Verse) making it easy to both read & recite. Secondly it has a Message of how CATHARTIC Poetry is in enabling the *aflicted* to share their story ! A number of Poems on MPS have been of that ilk ! Confessional & Cathartic ! NY State is a nice State to be in ~ especially in the Fall.
I share this site with ANGELA who is my Fiancee ! MPS works by reading (and commenting) on each others Poems. Please check our site ~ Thanks Angela & Brian. 🧡🧡
July 7th, 2019 16:22
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME HEATHER ~ Brian here ~ thanks for your first POEM ! It is very elegant ! Firstly it has Metre (22 line of Blank Verse) making it easy to both read & recite. Secondly it has a Message of how CATHARTIC Poetry is in enabling the *aflicted* to share their story ! A number of Poems on MPS have been of that ilk ! Confessional & Cathartic ! NY State is a nice State to be in ~ especially in the Fall.
I share this site with ANGELA who is my Fiancee ! MPS works by reading (and commenting) on each others Poems. Please check our site ~ Thanks Angela & Brian. 🧡🧡
July 7th, 2019 16:22
