love, sadness, worries, smiles
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GUTEN TAG MEIN FREUND : ANGELA here - Welcome to MPS it is an interactive site. Please excuse my German but we like to make everyone welcome ! Thanks for your first Poem - elegant in structure and subject. Replete with RHYME and RHYTHM as befits good poetry. I like the way you have highlighted a Key Word (in each verse) in colour !
LOVE (is surplus) SADNESS (tugs at the heart) WORRIES (own her) SMILES (no longer)
Her life - once Happy - now has - NO purpose - NO joy - NO stability - NO future ! very sad indeed I hope its not autobiographical. I can relate to some of these scenarios !
Im 31 and engaged to BRIAN (35) with whom I share this site. We plan to marry in 2020 ! BRIAN is in the UK and I have been in New Zealand (11,500 apart) on a WORK EXCHANGE - so I do get sad & lonely some days. We do skype every day and hes coming to get me in October ! Before I met Brian I had some relationships which caused me to lose MY purpose - joy & stability & the future seemed bleak so I can empathise with your elegant words - Thanks for caring and sharing - more PLEASE !

Blessings & Peace & Joy in LIFE & LOVE
Your Friend through Poetry ANGELA 🧡🧡
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July 20th, 2019 19:20