Comments received on poems by Lawrence 1970



Let go
dusk arising said:

when u find
she\'s not the one
and grow tired
of the things she\'s done
then the time is here
to make it right
if its gone so wrong
move along tonight

July 24th, 2019 01:18

Let go
Goldfinch60 said:

May your broken heart soon be fixed and love comes back into your life. Good write Lawrence. Welcome to MPS.

July 24th, 2019 01:12