5/29/19 Night
dusk arising said:

Yes this is a needy poem. Why should anybody need someone who is just needy? That\'s like expecting someone to want a burden?
What is there within you which makes you worth needing?

Well there\'s your writing for one isn\'t there.... but there\'s gotta be more..... looking forward to hearing about it young man.

Welcome to MPS with your strong first offering. Keep writing.

August 2nd, 2019 13:15