An Imperfect Delusion
dusk arising said:

I like it. It tells a tale oh so many lovers will easily relate to. But, to my ears, eyes and mind you do yourself a disservice making words rhyme. There\'s a depth of feeling here which doesn\'t need the \'twee-ness\' of rhyme. I hope you don\'t dislike me for writing that, by all means have a go at me for it, but it\'s truly intended positively and constructively.

August 3rd, 2019 11:58