Comments received on poems by aman1586



My two best companion - Heart and Mind
Fay Slimm. said:

A fine comparison in these well crafted lines knowing heart and mind are both needed as balance so are good companions. Thank you for sharing their differing gifts.

August 20th, 2019 13:49

My two best companion - Heart and Mind
dusk arising said:

One day both will relax alongside the heart and mind of another.

August 20th, 2019 13:22

Story of my life
dusk arising said:

Oh, and welcome to MPS by the way (I nearly forgot to say welcome).

This place works best if we read each others work and leave a comment or two on them. You\'ll soon find people commenting on yours and build up a bunch of appreciative followers. Feel free to pick holes in / comment upon any of my stuff.

I look forward to reading more from you.

August 19th, 2019 08:24

Story of my life
dusk arising said:

Later i learned to thank them. Closing my mind to the bullying insults, jibes and punches I found a deep place of solace within. Would i have retreated so far without them? I doubt it. But having found the doorway to escapism, i allowed myself entry at will.

So if you catch me daydreaming....

August 19th, 2019 08:19