Comments received on poems by 812Uknow
Drifting curse
dusk arising said:
The first four lines of this are brilliant. From there onward i got lost. Felt like two sections written on two different days.
You ought to write and publish on here more often.
January 10th, 2020 11:50
dusk arising said:
The first four lines of this are brilliant. From there onward i got lost. Felt like two sections written on two different days.
You ought to write and publish on here more often.
January 10th, 2020 11:50
Bad times gone worser
812Uknow said:
Thanks for the comment, a friend I lost always said worser and it stuck with me.
September 8th, 2019 00:13
812Uknow said:
Thanks for the comment, a friend I lost always said worser and it stuck with me.
September 8th, 2019 00:13
Thoughts+Feelings=Never healing
dusk arising said:
A little song comes to mind \"Always look on the bright side of life\".
Walking by a mirror and seeing the reflection is a good time to laugh at myself.
September 4th, 2019 06:40
dusk arising said:
A little song comes to mind \"Always look on the bright side of life\".
Walking by a mirror and seeing the reflection is a good time to laugh at myself.
September 4th, 2019 06:40
Thoughts+Feelings=Never healing
Goldfinch60 said:
You are always there, that person inside knows different as without that person, that you, you would not be able to write these words and find a way into a wonderful future.
Welcome to MPS.
September 4th, 2019 04:53
Goldfinch60 said:
You are always there, that person inside knows different as without that person, that you, you would not be able to write these words and find a way into a wonderful future.
Welcome to MPS.
September 4th, 2019 04:53
