Comments received on poems by Lamar Cole

Party Line
Bragee said:

Sweet and enjoyable!
Good Writing

October 18th, 2019 14:40

Party Line

GOOD AFTERNOON LAMAR ~ Welcome to MPS ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Well penned and an unteresting TALE ! Its difficult not to listen in when you hit a Party Line ! We*ll forgive this time because he got a RESULT ! Love the ELIZABETHAN word order in your last line ~ but you did at least manage to preserve the RHYME which is very importamt in Performance Poetry ! MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK Please check our site. We are an engaged Couple and share a site !

Blessings to You & Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

October 18th, 2019 11:59

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