Comments received on poems by tears from a pen



Losing you to yourself
myself and me said:

The tear from the pen, drip onto the paper and paint sadness and hope. Anyone, who addict to alcohol, had reasons behind it. Only if they could solved the issue behind it, could they come out of it. Well expressed.

December 12th, 2019 16:11

Losing you to yourself
tears from a pen said:

Sorry guys, here is the poem. My computer jibbed out and didn\'t upload the document.. hope you enjoy it..


Im losing you, with every sip.
With every drink I feel you slip,
Further away from the person I see, the one that I love and the one that loves me.

I\'m losing you with every fight, when the drink takes over an you lose sight.
Of who we are when you know I\'ve got you, after all things that we have made it through.

I\'m losing sight of how we can be, with every time you see me as the enemy.
You truly are the one I love most, but when your drunk I\'m as transparent as a ghost.

I know your sorry and we all make mistakes, but you arnt the one on which this toll takes.
You feel rough and our futures effect.
I do my up most to make you feel loved and respected.

I hope that at some point you\'ll truly see. How much I loved you an what you really meant to me.
You make me feel like been a better me, but do I make you feel like the person I see.

December 12th, 2019 12:05

As night gives way to day
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write tears, your words echo my philosophy of life, each new day is special.

Welcome to MPS.

December 12th, 2019 01:41

As night gives way to day
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD EVENING ANT ~ Welcome to MPS it is an empathetic site & works by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK Thanks for your very elegant first Poem ! Replete with Rhythm & Rhyming couplets ! Easy to read ~ nice to recite !
We all need to operate as INDIVIDUALS with self respect & self belief to be of value in Society. We need to discover our *Purpose in Life* & *Reason for Living* to make a difference in our Community ~ We all need to have PURPOSE ~ AMEN ! Im 36 and I have found that *Sharing & Caring* Poetry ~ on a site like this ~ give LIFE a PURPOSE and is an excellent way to share ones individuality ! Cornwall is a very Beautiful County to live in ! The Best Poet on this site ~ FAY ~ is from Cornwall and her poems are influenced by the Cornish Environment ~ Please check Her Site ~ OK

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
(Angela id my Fiancee !)

December 11th, 2019 18:58

As night gives way to day
tears from a pen said:

Thank you all for your amazing comments. I always try to write with a message. To always believe in yourself.
Feel free to share, more çoming each day. :) thanks again all.
Kind regards, Ant

December 11th, 2019 14:13

As night gives way to day
Poetic Dan said:

Wow. Spectacular thank you for sharing this and what an entrance!

Really appreciated
Much peace and respect

December 11th, 2019 13:39

As night gives way to day
Jane Frye said:

Nice read. Love your pen name.

December 11th, 2019 12:07