Comments received on poems by jorge serra



What I feel.
Friendship said:

You write very well. Your poem revolves around love and longing. It expresses deep affection and the joy experienced when in the presence of a loved one, juxtaposed with the pain of separation and the yearning for connection. The speaker reflects on the beauty and happiness brought by their partner, portraying love as a powerful and transformative experience.

November 29th, 2025 16:50

Yesterday
Friendship said:

The poem expresses a deep sense of loss and longing for a past love. It explores the emotional turmoil of reminiscing about a relationship that has faded over time, juxtaposed with a glimmer of hope for rekindling that love.


November 29th, 2025 10:04

Yesterday
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of renewal. it sings out like a raising sun. Nicely done

November 29th, 2025 04:17

What I feel.
sorenbarrett said:

There is passion that still resides in this write. Nicely done

November 29th, 2025 04:03

A thought of love.
KDawg said:

This is a love we all hope to have❤️

September 6th, 2023 20:45

Winter.
rebmasters said:

\'In the cold winter i always remember you, telling me about your love...\'

An absolutely cracking opening line - love it x

October 5th, 2021 03:12

A dream.
dusk arising said:

May you spend may days like this in blissful expectation of tonite and tomorrow.

March 10th, 2021 04:42

A dream.
Goldfinch60 said:

May that dream become reality Jorge.

Andy

March 10th, 2021 01:36

When the night begin.
AlitaOpal said:

tu poesía es asombrosa 🌹

February 26th, 2021 18:41

Pretty woman.
AlitaOpal said:

How romantic, I really enjoyed reading this 🌹

February 26th, 2021 08:57

If you were here with me.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving words jorge.

Andy

February 20th, 2021 02:45

If you were here with me.
FredPeyer said:

You expressed the feeling of missing somebody very well, jorge!

February 19th, 2021 21:31

If you were here with me.
AlitaOpal said:

Beautiful write 🎈

February 19th, 2021 18:04

Today.
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love rise and get stronger with every moment.

Andy

December 20th, 2020 01:30

Pretty woman.
jorge serra said:

GON thank you for your comentary, a pretty woman is always a motive to write a poem.

July 6th, 2020 09:00

Pretty woman.
Noah Malice said:

nicely heartfelt

July 6th, 2020 03:37

The Blondie girl.
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving write.

December 15th, 2019 16:37

The summer.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA JORGE ~ Gracias por tua prima Poema ! Welcome to MPS ! Ahhhhh SUMMER ! I remember it well and the Love al-fresco ! Its starting to snow already in the UK and the cold wind of BREXIT is already blowing! Love your POEM ~ my experience too ~ whatever the Season ~ whenever my LOVER - ANGELA touches my Hair & my Lips ~ IT IS SUMMER !


Feliz Natale y 2020 !
Brian y Angela 💚🧡💚


December 10th, 2019 11:01