Comments received on poems by Carly Lou



Emptiness
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Hi Carly Lou (Nice name !) Im 31 and I have gone through som bad phases trying to find the right MAN ! However after a few bad experiences I found BRIAN (36) and we are getting married in April ! It is FIRST for both of US ! Love the structure of your First Poem - Full of Rhyme (couplets) & Rhythm ! The subject is rather melancholy - but you tell us it is retrospective - when you were half your age - I trust things are better today ? Thanks for caring & sharing - more please !

Blessings & Peace & Joy for the future !
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
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each others Poems ~ ANGELA !

January 17th, 2020 12:12

Emptiness
Poetic Dan said:

I\'m soon to be 39 and and all I could ask for but yet your words hit every spot I feel...

Thank you so much for sharing
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write

January 17th, 2020 11:00

Emptiness
Edith Walela said:

Your words described my high school years as well. Your poem made me shed a tear for your pain, mine, and all others. Thank you for sharing, even though it describes a sad time it is comforting to know I was not alone.

January 17th, 2020 10:19