Comments received on poems by grace.b_x



Climate change poem, car theme
orchidee said:

Good write Grace.

January 30th, 2020 04:44

Climate change poem, car theme
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Brian Here - Good Evening Grace - Welcome to MPS it is an empathetic site. Thanks for sharing your first poem on a very important theme - CLIMATE CHANGE ! I am interested in the Environment and support Greta Thunberg. We are 31 (Angela) and 36 (Brian) She will still be alive in 2100 when things will be much worse on Planet Earth. The population will be in excess of 10 billion (now 7.5 B) CO2 will have risen also Global Warming ! The amount of CO2 from passenger vehicle emmissions rises every year and is population related ! Car emmisions also contain acid gases SO2 & NO2 which are very corrosive and cause acid rain. We are all very selfish and the majority of car owners in the USA - UK and other Developed Countries - know we are the problem - but refuse to give them up becaus of their convenience and necessity for a variety of reasons ! We do uses BIKES in Spring Summer & Autumn for short journeys !
Love the elegant structure (Rhyme & Rhythm) of your Poem - repetition is very important in poetry for emphasis ! More poems please !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛

January 29th, 2020 18:00