Potential
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Hi Sparkey welcome to MPS. It is a proactive site which operates by reading & commenting on each others poetry - OK I share this site with BRIAN my Fiancee. Thanks for your first poem - Elegantly written in flowing free verse ! It has a very challenging subject - POTENTIAL !
All of us have POTENTIAL - because we are part of the Human Race ! Created not just a little higher than the Apes - BUT - just a little lower than the ANGELS ! There is a big difference. The combined POTENTIAL of the Human race - in any decade - is infinite ! In 1969 we walked o the Moon didnt we ? In my experience - cometh the CHALENGE - cometh the INSPIRATION. Im a PHYSIOTHERAPIST so I must get my exercise & diet programmes etc right - or I could do more harm than good ! Mine is a *hands on* profession so I have to have *Healing Hands* the Human Hand is a miracle of design and as Humans one of our greatest gifts with its amazing sense of touch. I am also a Pianist. Have you developed the POTENTIAL of your hands and your other senses ?
I love the optimism expressed in your poem from line 26 onwards *But the paper isnt blank* ! Power of Positive Thinking ! Your DESTINY will be fulfilled ! More Poems please !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
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March 7th, 2020 18:27