simplicity as a way
mvvenkataraman said:

My dearest poet, I beg your pardon
As in many places lie sheer confusion
Please forgive me for this comment
As I am your true well-wisher dear

Rhyme is not needed for poetry at all
But, to some extent, grammar is a must
I humbly ask you to follow grammar rules
So that you poem will glitter like gold

You possess enough vocabulary surely
But, just a better arrangement is needed
Hope you will take my words sportively
May God bless you to write ever better.

mvvenkataraman

November 6th, 2013 09:39