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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE (I share site with My Husband - of Six Months - Brian). Good afternoon ZINNIA (love your name & logo) welcome to MPS. It is a proactive site - it operates by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK. Please visit our Site ~ Thanks !
Love your first Poem you have set a high Standard (which encourages us All !) both in Structure & Subject. Interesting *Free Verse* and easy to recite ~ We are Performance Poets. We have visited Maine & New England in the Fall ~ AWESOME ~ I guess you desribe it as it is NOW ?
In Stanzas 1--3 ~ Love your description of the Pond ~ makes me feel like I am there experiencing the elements. At the end of S 3. and in S 4. you are describing the scene from your viewpoint ?
In S 5. there is a sudden switch and you write as the water ! Very interesting SWITCH ! Thanks for sharing ~ more Poems Please ~ Thanks A & B !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !

October 19th, 2020 14:09