Comments received on poems by jbritt321
Haze
Clara said:
As they say, the first step is always the hardest but yet the bravest. Good piece and welcome to MPS.
November 19th, 2020 14:39
Clara said:
As they say, the first step is always the hardest but yet the bravest. Good piece and welcome to MPS.
November 19th, 2020 14:39
If You’re Anything Like Me
Clara said:
I believe we all need to be a bit more like you! Such carefree words here, much enjoyed.
November 18th, 2020 19:12
Clara said:
I believe we all need to be a bit more like you! Such carefree words here, much enjoyed.
November 18th, 2020 19:12
If You’re Anything Like Me
dusk arising said:
Been there, done that. The T-shirt isn\'t warm enough these days though.... that what ageing does for ya.
Live it up whilst you can, it doesn\'t last forever.
November 18th, 2020 11:45
dusk arising said:
Been there, done that. The T-shirt isn\'t warm enough these days though.... that what ageing does for ya.
Live it up whilst you can, it doesn\'t last forever.
November 18th, 2020 11:45
Anomalous
Doggerel Dave said:
Heads up re your age would have been good (not because I\'m ageist - I try extremely hard not to be) but in this case, in view of what\'s here and your previous poem, I can only assume your youth and endorse dusk\'s comments on both.
Take care, Dave
November 17th, 2020 20:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Heads up re your age would have been good (not because I\'m ageist - I try extremely hard not to be) but in this case, in view of what\'s here and your previous poem, I can only assume your youth and endorse dusk\'s comments on both.
Take care, Dave
November 17th, 2020 20:01
Anomalous
dusk arising said:
Seems like they are the wrong society for you to be mixing in.
November 17th, 2020 14:25
dusk arising said:
Seems like they are the wrong society for you to be mixing in.
November 17th, 2020 14:25
Haze
dusk arising said:
Reads like you are hungry to move on. The future is out there an on its way to lay choices at your feet. Try to make decisions which will make you proud of them when you look back for there are so many pitfalls to avoid.
November 17th, 2020 09:57
dusk arising said:
Reads like you are hungry to move on. The future is out there an on its way to lay choices at your feet. Try to make decisions which will make you proud of them when you look back for there are so many pitfalls to avoid.
November 17th, 2020 09:57
Haze
Goldfinch60 said:
Your future is the wonder of your life to come and will be come bright and clear as you reach it.
Welcome to MPS.
November 17th, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Your future is the wonder of your life to come and will be come bright and clear as you reach it.
Welcome to MPS.
November 17th, 2020 01:41
