Comments received on poems by mysleze



breaking your heart in 4 lines
L. B. Mek said:

indeed
sometimes we have to let go knowing
only we can ever know
exactly why
we need to take a breath
free
from-this-intangible-constraint\'s
of a self-curated: toxic environment..
good write dear poet, well expressed

February 22nd, 2021 05:54

breaking your heart in 4 lines
FredPeyer said:

There are always two sides to a story!

February 21st, 2021 19:10

seven lines
Goldfinch60 said:

What more could you give indeed.

Andy

November 30th, 2020 01:23

Mother
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write nawrocka.

Andy

November 18th, 2020 01:39

Mother
Doggerel Dave said:

Sussed out your Profile.
Seventeen years? English not Your first language? I find both hard to believe.
Go for it - you have everything within your grasp.
Regards
Dave

November 17th, 2020 18:52

muse
L. B. Mek said:

I\'m not so sure, it tends to be the jaggedly imperfect edges of our experiences we remember most and the grating non-uniform finishes to those textures that intrigue us innately,
imperfection is a raw form of Artistry that is hard to replicate, so yes I also agree: simplicity is key, but never diminish your talent because it doesn\'t fit-in with the established status qou,
\'do you\' and let that be your legacy!

November 17th, 2020 03:41

muse
Goldfinch60 said:

May that inspiration be forever with you nawrocka.

Welcome to MPS.

November 16th, 2020 01:07