Comments received on poems by poetrygurl98
Collecting Flowers
L. B. Mek said:
no my dear, the morose reality of humanity is we\'re made more of water/moisture than any other singular element, so cry yourself to that land of momentary peace, as many times as it takes: just remember, to leave it all on your pillow, wash it clean and puff it back-up - ready, for what\'s sure to come next...
\'It\'s easy to get distracted by life and forget who you are and where you came from
I used to have it engraved on both my hands
Now only deep wounds are left on my heart.\'
I like the poetic flow in these lines
December 3rd, 2020 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
no my dear, the morose reality of humanity is we\'re made more of water/moisture than any other singular element, so cry yourself to that land of momentary peace, as many times as it takes: just remember, to leave it all on your pillow, wash it clean and puff it back-up - ready, for what\'s sure to come next...
\'It\'s easy to get distracted by life and forget who you are and where you came from
I used to have it engraved on both my hands
Now only deep wounds are left on my heart.\'
I like the poetic flow in these lines
December 3rd, 2020 05:53
Collecting Flowers
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write pg, I am sure that your tears will stop flowing when the right person comes into you life and brings you flowers every day.
Welcome to MPS.
December 3rd, 2020 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write pg, I am sure that your tears will stop flowing when the right person comes into you life and brings you flowers every day.
Welcome to MPS.
December 3rd, 2020 01:52
