Comments received on poems by Chick
My Monster
L. B. Mek said:
such vivid imagery
and good use of repetition
to portray that sense of incessant
unwanted, presence
alluring to its psychological, effects
that accompany the easily, visible
physical..
(a really well executed, poem
thanks for sharing
I\'m so sorry for your struggles
and I hope they find a cure soon)
thanks for sharing
a brave write, since
as a model
this must be harder on you
as it seems to have robbed you
of a tangible, career path or dream
June 9th, 2022 03:52
L. B. Mek said:
such vivid imagery
and good use of repetition
to portray that sense of incessant
unwanted, presence
alluring to its psychological, effects
that accompany the easily, visible
physical..
(a really well executed, poem
thanks for sharing
I\'m so sorry for your struggles
and I hope they find a cure soon)
thanks for sharing
a brave write, since
as a model
this must be harder on you
as it seems to have robbed you
of a tangible, career path or dream
June 9th, 2022 03:52
My Monster
LexiLou said:
I liked your poem a lot. You beautifully worded your pain, experience, and struggle with psoriasis. Good luck with everything that you wish to accomplish in life. You’re strong and unstoppable and can accomplish anything ❤️
June 8th, 2022 21:28
LexiLou said:
I liked your poem a lot. You beautifully worded your pain, experience, and struggle with psoriasis. Good luck with everything that you wish to accomplish in life. You’re strong and unstoppable and can accomplish anything ❤️
June 8th, 2022 21:28
Pillow talks.
FredPeyer said:
Well written Evangaline. I hope it helped your friend too.
February 21st, 2021 22:43
FredPeyer said:
Well written Evangaline. I hope it helped your friend too.
February 21st, 2021 22:43
Pillow talks.
Goldfinch60 said:
A very sad emotive write Evangaline but one day that pillow will be renewed and real love will come to share that pillow with you.
Andy
February 21st, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
A very sad emotive write Evangaline but one day that pillow will be renewed and real love will come to share that pillow with you.
Andy
February 21st, 2021 01:35
Pillow talks.
dusk arising said:
Will she grow into a person behind a painted mask of attraction displaying \'I want your attention\' to many a poor suitor? Or retain her dignity and place her personal integrity forefront to the world.
A choice overlooked by so many it appears from the state of western society.
February 21st, 2021 00:54
dusk arising said:
Will she grow into a person behind a painted mask of attraction displaying \'I want your attention\' to many a poor suitor? Or retain her dignity and place her personal integrity forefront to the world.
A choice overlooked by so many it appears from the state of western society.
February 21st, 2021 00:54
Pillow talks.
Doggerel Dave said:
Category: Sad ?
More than sad it\'s bloody awful.
A well constructed piece it is, but what else? Imaginative statement? Something you\'ve witnessed? experienced? Can\'t blame you if you don\'t wish to answer, particularly the last, but it gives me the horrors, to be quite honest - even if, as I am, aware that such situations do exist.
More context please.
But above all else, what am I supposed to do?
For you, If this comes within the bounds of your personal experience, please ensure the appropriate authorities or support are available to you or the subject of this piece.
February 20th, 2021 23:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Category: Sad ?
More than sad it\'s bloody awful.
A well constructed piece it is, but what else? Imaginative statement? Something you\'ve witnessed? experienced? Can\'t blame you if you don\'t wish to answer, particularly the last, but it gives me the horrors, to be quite honest - even if, as I am, aware that such situations do exist.
More context please.
But above all else, what am I supposed to do?
For you, If this comes within the bounds of your personal experience, please ensure the appropriate authorities or support are available to you or the subject of this piece.
February 20th, 2021 23:51
All these questions and you’re still not happy
Olivia. said:
So relatable. It’s lovely x
February 14th, 2021 10:45
Olivia. said:
So relatable. It’s lovely x
February 14th, 2021 10:45
If you are reading this...
L. B. Mek said:
immersed in that empathic solace, only a poet\'s words can truly transmit..
a laudable write and a great read
February 12th, 2021 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
immersed in that empathic solace, only a poet\'s words can truly transmit..
a laudable write and a great read
February 12th, 2021 06:28
If you are reading this...
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love spread to everybody.
Andy
February 12th, 2021 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love spread to everybody.
Andy
February 12th, 2021 02:00
If you are reading this...
Doggerel Dave said:
You can send me messages like that any time you like...
February 11th, 2021 18:43
Doggerel Dave said:
You can send me messages like that any time you like...
February 11th, 2021 18:43
If you are reading this...
RDS said:
I\'m proud of you sweet-poet with such a positive message.
J
February 11th, 2021 18:01
RDS said:
I\'m proud of you sweet-poet with such a positive message.
J
February 11th, 2021 18:01
Your tree deserves to grow
L. B. Mek said:
I too, cling to whatever perch my life grants me to rest upon, from all the toiling and wishful planning, while other\'s - seemingly unaware of what promise gravity - awaits to greet with, simply rush-on by - lost: in their dreams of pinnacle vantages...
a contemplative write, wonderfully worded dear Poet
February 9th, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
I too, cling to whatever perch my life grants me to rest upon, from all the toiling and wishful planning, while other\'s - seemingly unaware of what promise gravity - awaits to greet with, simply rush-on by - lost: in their dreams of pinnacle vantages...
a contemplative write, wonderfully worded dear Poet
February 9th, 2021 05:42
Your tree deserves to grow
FredPeyer said:
It\'s not about falling down, it\'s about getting up again! :-)
February 8th, 2021 19:50
FredPeyer said:
It\'s not about falling down, it\'s about getting up again! :-)
February 8th, 2021 19:50
Your tree deserves to grow
dusk arising said:
Careful.... there\'s always someone looking for a fallen apple hoping to bake a pie on the cheap.
....but, prince in frogs clothing, he could be you saviour.
February 8th, 2021 18:33
dusk arising said:
Careful.... there\'s always someone looking for a fallen apple hoping to bake a pie on the cheap.
....but, prince in frogs clothing, he could be you saviour.
February 8th, 2021 18:33
Welcome to 2020
Poetic Dan said:
Wow....beautifully done but remember there will always be dark & light it all depends on what we wish to focus on.
Ended so magnificently, with not many wish to have an honest open conversation...
Inspirational stuff!
Keep up the write
February 6th, 2021 14:38
Poetic Dan said:
Wow....beautifully done but remember there will always be dark & light it all depends on what we wish to focus on.
Ended so magnificently, with not many wish to have an honest open conversation...
Inspirational stuff!
Keep up the write
February 6th, 2021 14:38
Welcome to 2020
FredPeyer said:
Another very good poem EF, right from the heart with a lot of truth in it. I love the line \'An instagrammable lover\'. You made up a great word here. I might even steal it from you for one of my future scribbles.
You are right, I do feel sorry for my grandchildren and do hope the world will become a better place. And poems like this will help draw attention to these problems. Well done!
February 5th, 2021 18:55
FredPeyer said:
Another very good poem EF, right from the heart with a lot of truth in it. I love the line \'An instagrammable lover\'. You made up a great word here. I might even steal it from you for one of my future scribbles.
You are right, I do feel sorry for my grandchildren and do hope the world will become a better place. And poems like this will help draw attention to these problems. Well done!
February 5th, 2021 18:55
Welcome to 2020
Doggerel Dave said:
I can understand why it might be difficult to find for many today, but is there nothing you can identify as funny, amusing, optimistic?
February 5th, 2021 17:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I can understand why it might be difficult to find for many today, but is there nothing you can identify as funny, amusing, optimistic?
February 5th, 2021 17:32
When will you care
heatherbee said:
Felt such sadness for your friend iv had friends in abusive marriages physical and mentally and it\'s so hard for them to see themselves as a victim it\'s just a relationship and we as a society excuse these people by not speaking of it. So well done you lovely words powerful.
February 4th, 2021 00:32
heatherbee said:
Felt such sadness for your friend iv had friends in abusive marriages physical and mentally and it\'s so hard for them to see themselves as a victim it\'s just a relationship and we as a society excuse these people by not speaking of it. So well done you lovely words powerful.
February 4th, 2021 00:32
My new friend
heatherbee said:
Stay safe, your words are haunting but so true as I have also suffered from depression. I hope you get some peace and a better mindset.
February 4th, 2021 00:27
heatherbee said:
Stay safe, your words are haunting but so true as I have also suffered from depression. I hope you get some peace and a better mindset.
February 4th, 2021 00:27
A letter from my kidnapper
heatherbee said:
Scary to read but just had to carry on very good.
February 4th, 2021 00:24
heatherbee said:
Scary to read but just had to carry on very good.
February 4th, 2021 00:24
My new friend
FredPeyer said:
Depression is a terrible thing, EF. My wife has been fighting it for many years. I don\'t know what is best, but Jerry is right, you may get better if you get help.
February 2nd, 2021 13:02
FredPeyer said:
Depression is a terrible thing, EF. My wife has been fighting it for many years. I don\'t know what is best, but Jerry is right, you may get better if you get help.
February 2nd, 2021 13:02
My new friend
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well-written poem EF.
I am not qualified to treat you, however, I know from experience depression can be challenging. If it is a chemical imbalance in your body there are meds for it. If not you will need therapy. There is help. Stay Safe dear heart.
February 2nd, 2021 09:24
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well-written poem EF.
I am not qualified to treat you, however, I know from experience depression can be challenging. If it is a chemical imbalance in your body there are meds for it. If not you will need therapy. There is help. Stay Safe dear heart.
February 2nd, 2021 09:24
Trigger warning Eating Disorder
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s a lucid description of a disorder which to many (including to some extent, me) is puzzling. Definitely makes the subtleties clearer.
Felt a great lift at the end, where hope appeared as you have apparently found a way out.
Good luck for the future.
February 1st, 2021 21:10
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s a lucid description of a disorder which to many (including to some extent, me) is puzzling. Definitely makes the subtleties clearer.
Felt a great lift at the end, where hope appeared as you have apparently found a way out.
Good luck for the future.
February 1st, 2021 21:10
Trigger warning Eating Disorder
heatherbee said:
Loved your words so powerful iv a friend who suffers every day with her anorexia she has triggers and during these dark times she suffers more her life is a nitemare right now so I feel those words so much. Thankyou
February 1st, 2021 08:42
heatherbee said:
Loved your words so powerful iv a friend who suffers every day with her anorexia she has triggers and during these dark times she suffers more her life is a nitemare right now so I feel those words so much. Thankyou
February 1st, 2021 08:42
Trigger warning Eating Disorder
L. B. Mek said:
you write on meaningful and important subjects that are socially pertinent, though may not be experienced by society\'s majority,
yet your words read relatable with how much you choose to divulge of your own testimony or other\'s... thanks for sharing your wonderful talent and helping readers like me evolve, to become a little less ignorant...
another great write!
February 1st, 2021 07:39
L. B. Mek said:
you write on meaningful and important subjects that are socially pertinent, though may not be experienced by society\'s majority,
yet your words read relatable with how much you choose to divulge of your own testimony or other\'s... thanks for sharing your wonderful talent and helping readers like me evolve, to become a little less ignorant...
another great write!
February 1st, 2021 07:39
When will you care
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, how insightfully you unfurl the hypocrisy within a society that \'chimes\' to our young lady\'s - \'in the making\':
\'oh gal, he is only pulling your hair
cause\' he like ya...
don\'t mind him none
a smile is all he asking for...\'
then a decade later, they berate those same \'young ladies\'
with their judgemental words:
\'\'gal, why you \'let him\'
treat you - like that?
doncha kow - no better...\'\'
and they - are the wise words of the \'fairer sex\',
one can only guess at how distorted an interpretation of \'attraction\' the \'other side\' has developed...
still, no excuses: \'some\' men can make dirt look like gold dust,
but please, know - a lot
of \'good raw earth\', is trampled on
by those same women, who can\'t see those fertile grounds
waiting patiently by their side, bored by the ease of accessibility and overzealous willingness,
choosing instead - to tame, those wild \'mustang\' key holders and their promise of a \'thrill\' ride...
forgive me for my uninvited sermon of a comment, I was inspired by your insightfully - well articulated depiction of a usually emotion addled subject...
a brilliant write!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
February 1st, 2021 06:38
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, how insightfully you unfurl the hypocrisy within a society that \'chimes\' to our young lady\'s - \'in the making\':
\'oh gal, he is only pulling your hair
cause\' he like ya...
don\'t mind him none
a smile is all he asking for...\'
then a decade later, they berate those same \'young ladies\'
with their judgemental words:
\'\'gal, why you \'let him\'
treat you - like that?
doncha kow - no better...\'\'
and they - are the wise words of the \'fairer sex\',
one can only guess at how distorted an interpretation of \'attraction\' the \'other side\' has developed...
still, no excuses: \'some\' men can make dirt look like gold dust,
but please, know - a lot
of \'good raw earth\', is trampled on
by those same women, who can\'t see those fertile grounds
waiting patiently by their side, bored by the ease of accessibility and overzealous willingness,
choosing instead - to tame, those wild \'mustang\' key holders and their promise of a \'thrill\' ride...
forgive me for my uninvited sermon of a comment, I was inspired by your insightfully - well articulated depiction of a usually emotion addled subject...
a brilliant write!
thanks for sharing dear Poet
February 1st, 2021 06:38
Trigger warning Eating Disorder
orchidee said:
Never mind Instagram models. They\'re vain and stupid. Let\'s not copy them. They get enough vain publicity anyway.
I suspect the human frame was never suited to be a size 4.
Hope you find the way through this :)
February 1st, 2021 05:19
orchidee said:
Never mind Instagram models. They\'re vain and stupid. Let\'s not copy them. They get enough vain publicity anyway.
I suspect the human frame was never suited to be a size 4.
Hope you find the way through this :)
February 1st, 2021 05:19
When will you care
FredPeyer said:
Well written ef, unfortunately there are many relationships where one partner has to endure much and is not able to leave for whatever reason. But mental and/or physical abuse is plainly wrong.
January 31st, 2021 20:35
FredPeyer said:
Well written ef, unfortunately there are many relationships where one partner has to endure much and is not able to leave for whatever reason. But mental and/or physical abuse is plainly wrong.
January 31st, 2021 20:35
When will you care
dusk arising said:
Why did she choose to be with such a shmuck? Or was she forced into it at gunpoint or something. Hope she learns her lesson.
January 31st, 2021 14:52
dusk arising said:
Why did she choose to be with such a shmuck? Or was she forced into it at gunpoint or something. Hope she learns her lesson.
January 31st, 2021 14:52
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