Comments received on poems by Chick



My angel, My baby
Tony36 said:

Heart breaking, but a well written and expressed poem.

December 5th, 2024 14:54

My angel, My baby
TobaniNataiella said:

A heart breaking poem, i hope the pain is slowly healing. Very well written

December 5th, 2024 12:37

Welcome to 2020
Poetic Dan said:

Wow....beautifully done but remember there will always be dark & light it all depends on what we wish to focus on.

Ended so magnificently, with not many wish to have an honest open conversation...

Inspirational stuff!
Keep up the write

February 6th, 2021 14:38

Welcome to 2020
FredPeyer said:

Another very good poem EF, right from the heart with a lot of truth in it. I love the line \'An instagrammable lover\'. You made up a great word here. I might even steal it from you for one of my future scribbles.
You are right, I do feel sorry for my grandchildren and do hope the world will become a better place. And poems like this will help draw attention to these problems. Well done!

February 5th, 2021 18:55

Welcome to 2020
Doggerel Dave said:

I can understand why it might be difficult to find for many today, but is there nothing you can identify as funny, amusing, optimistic?

February 5th, 2021 17:32

Welcome to 2020
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written E.F.

February 5th, 2021 09:50

Trigger warning Eating Disorder
Doggerel Dave said:

That’s a lucid description of a disorder which to many (including to some extent, me) is puzzling. Definitely makes the subtleties clearer.
Felt a great lift at the end, where hope appeared as you have apparently found a way out.
Good luck for the future.


February 1st, 2021 21:10

Trigger warning Eating Disorder
heatherbee said:

Loved your words so powerful iv a friend who suffers every day with her anorexia she has triggers and during these dark times she suffers more her life is a nitemare right now so I feel those words so much. Thankyou

February 1st, 2021 08:42

Trigger warning Eating Disorder
L. B. Mek said:

you write on meaningful and important subjects that are socially pertinent, though may not be experienced by society\'s majority,
yet your words read relatable with how much you choose to divulge of your own testimony or other\'s... thanks for sharing your wonderful talent and helping readers like me evolve, to become a little less ignorant...
another great write!

February 1st, 2021 07:39

Trigger warning Eating Disorder
orchidee said:

Never mind Instagram models. They\'re vain and stupid. Let\'s not copy them. They get enough vain publicity anyway.
I suspect the human frame was never suited to be a size 4.
Hope you find the way through this :)

February 1st, 2021 05:19