Comments received on poems by evangalinefrances



A dyslexic poet
Jerry Reynolds said:

Girl you are a wonderful mess. I enjoyed the write.

February 22nd, 2021 17:40

A dyslexic poet
FredPeyer said:

Evangeline, I don\'t care how you write, I care about what you write. And you have no problem there!

February 22nd, 2021 13:58

A dyslexic poet
L. B. Mek said:

in reality: only se;f-etitled critic\'s and the poet \'frets\' about aesthetics, us readers either connect or don\'t..
everything else is lost to that beguiling mystery: we call poetry,
a good read

February 22nd, 2021 06:30

A dyslexic poet
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes I can read it too , and given your previous poems I\'d never have known.
Still, I can\'t see anything wrong with a return to spellcheck (my stuff would be an unintelligible mess without it).
Not too sure about a grammar checker though - it might stifle your creativity. The damn thing is not really appropriate for a poet.
In case you haven\'t already gathered, the real you is all right too!


February 22nd, 2021 05:25

A dyslexic poet
dusk arising said:

It looks just fine to me because in my mind poetry is all about the communication of an emotion. And you do that well.

I have felt dyslexia creeping into my life as i age and a recent drug therapy course only exacerbated the condition. I too check my writing, though not always sufficiently, for errors and omissions.

At the end of the day it has to be said that you evangelinefrances do communicate well regardless of any error which creeps through your editing. Such \"sins\" (LOL) are easily forgiven

February 22nd, 2021 04:32

A dyslexic poet
orchidee said:

A fine write Evangeline.

February 22nd, 2021 02:59

A dyslexic poet
Goldfinch60 said:

It looks fine to me Evangeline, the brain can interpret these tings quite easily so please do not worry about the spelling, the thoughts behind your words are the most important thing.

Andy

February 22nd, 2021 01:41

A dyslexic poet
Mary Peters said:

Luckily, for many people meaning does not depend on the appearance of the word that carries it, EvangalineFrances... Besides, apps deal with forms for us to deal with thoughts... (Thanks for sharing this!)

February 22nd, 2021 01:28

Pillow talks.
FredPeyer said:

Well written Evangaline. I hope it helped your friend too.

February 21st, 2021 22:43

Pillow talks.
Goldfinch60 said:

A very sad emotive write Evangaline but one day that pillow will be renewed and real love will come to share that pillow with you.

Andy

February 21st, 2021 01:35

Pillow talks.
dusk arising said:

Will she grow into a person behind a painted mask of attraction displaying \'I want your attention\' to many a poor suitor? Or retain her dignity and place her personal integrity forefront to the world.

A choice overlooked by so many it appears from the state of western society.

February 21st, 2021 00:54

Pillow talks.
Doggerel Dave said:

Category: Sad ?
More than sad it\'s bloody awful.
A well constructed piece it is, but what else? Imaginative statement? Something you\'ve witnessed? experienced? Can\'t blame you if you don\'t wish to answer, particularly the last, but it gives me the horrors, to be quite honest - even if, as I am, aware that such situations do exist.
More context please.
But above all else, what am I supposed to do?
For you, If this comes within the bounds of your personal experience, please ensure the appropriate authorities or support are available to you or the subject of this piece.



February 20th, 2021 23:51

I love you
Olivia. said:

I can see how your trying
And I\'m proud of you
If no ones told you today that they love you I do
And I appreciate you too

I Love this xxx

February 14th, 2021 10:48

All these questions and you’re still not happy
Olivia. said:

So relatable. It’s lovely x

February 14th, 2021 10:45

I love you
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write, love can lead others to have a good life.

Andy

February 13th, 2021 02:05

If you are reading this...
L. B. Mek said:

immersed in that empathic solace, only a poet\'s words can truly transmit..
a laudable write and a great read

February 12th, 2021 06:28

If you are reading this...
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love spread to everybody.

Andy

February 12th, 2021 02:00

Scared of myself
FredPeyer said:

Evangaline, I don\'t have anxiety, but after reading your very well written \'Letter to anxiety\' I understand at least a little bit how it must feel. I do hope you can defeat it!

February 11th, 2021 20:16

If you are reading this...
Doggerel Dave said:

You can send me messages like that any time you like...

February 11th, 2021 18:43

If you are reading this...
RDS said:

I\'m proud of you sweet-poet with such a positive message.
J

February 11th, 2021 18:01

Scared of myself
L. B. Mek said:

try thinking of anxiety, as your personal defence mechanism - similar to fear,
then attempt to excavate exactly what it is that\'s triggering your need to defend yourself,
this process won\'t be a short-cut solution, but it will change that limiting perception of anxiety, so that now you\'re looking at anxiety as a symptom of something that you need to address and in that journey to finding a root cause \'reasoning/explanation\' for your condition, you will surely come to understand that anxiety can be conditioned - over time, into a relatively secondary presence in your life...
just some words to help guide you away from thinking that anxiety has some inescapable hold over you, it doesn\'t, you can prevail!
if necessary seek \'qualified\' help as well,
there is no excuse for \'living with it\':
when you can \'do something about it\'...
thanks for sharing dear Poet,

February 11th, 2021 05:25

Your my favourite person
L. B. Mek said:

I like how your write\'s deliver each persona you\'re portraying - unfiltered and rustic, as if you\'re not merely trying to get your sentiment\'s and messages across, but also giving the reader a taste of the raw reality that some people have to deal with,
another thought provoking read

February 11th, 2021 04:32

Scared of myself
orchidee said:

The anxiety of doing a thing can be worse than actually doing it. Sometimes the anxiety wins though, and we don\'t always do what we want to do, or need to do.
Really, people are going about their everyday lives, not noticing us. Not meaning they ignore us completely though.

February 11th, 2021 03:59

Scared of myself
Goldfinch60 said:

One of my philosophies in life is:

\"This is me, take me as I am, if you do not like it that is your problem not mine.\"

Maybe if you apply this to your anxiety your own confidence will raise to the surface of your mind.

Andy

February 11th, 2021 01:11

Scared of myself
heatherbee said:

Such tortured words it\'s so awful to have anxiety my son does and I wish he could express in words at times. Take care.

February 10th, 2021 17:59

Your my favourite person
Julie B said:

It hits very close to home ... very deep , great read

February 10th, 2021 03:19

Your my favourite person
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive words.

Andy

February 10th, 2021 01:23

Your my favourite person
heatherbee said:

Wow powerful.

February 9th, 2021 17:49

Your tree deserves to grow
L. B. Mek said:

I too, cling to whatever perch my life grants me to rest upon, from all the toiling and wishful planning, while other\'s - seemingly unaware of what promise gravity - awaits to greet with, simply rush-on by - lost: in their dreams of pinnacle vantages...
a contemplative write, wonderfully worded dear Poet

February 9th, 2021 05:42

S.E.X
FredPeyer said:

Evangaline, I like the way you \'shake up\' the complacency here. Yes, there are guys like that, and yes, there are women like that, and it is not right. Changing these age-old ingrained injustices from our male oriented society will still take some time. One day women will look back at history and wonder what kind of mess it was.

February 8th, 2021 20:04

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