Comments received on poems by readyplayerstew
Illimitable Love (from “The Blessings of Poetry”)
L. B. Mek said:
\'The surface barely scratched in schools
and these recurring machinations
of the lion
telling the giraffes tale
are said to be true.\'
the white out, in humanity\'s annals
may shade the worst darkness
from our inherited legacy
of self manufactured, catastrophe
but the spilt blood
in those tell-tale red, sands
outed all our forefathers hypocrisy
\'love thy neighbour
till its time for war, over the milk
the cat spilled...\'
(devoid of theological alliance,
this is a write, full
of deeply insightful commentary
a wonderfully didactic write,
thanks for sharing)
December 16th, 2021 03:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'The surface barely scratched in schools
and these recurring machinations
of the lion
telling the giraffes tale
are said to be true.\'
the white out, in humanity\'s annals
may shade the worst darkness
from our inherited legacy
of self manufactured, catastrophe
but the spilt blood
in those tell-tale red, sands
outed all our forefathers hypocrisy
\'love thy neighbour
till its time for war, over the milk
the cat spilled...\'
(devoid of theological alliance,
this is a write, full
of deeply insightful commentary
a wonderfully didactic write,
thanks for sharing)
December 16th, 2021 03:47
Style Stalker
Goldfinch60 said:
The pleasures we find in life have nothing to do with wealth, the meaningful pleasures are free.
Welcome to MPS.
March 7th, 2021 02:35
Goldfinch60 said:
The pleasures we find in life have nothing to do with wealth, the meaningful pleasures are free.
Welcome to MPS.
March 7th, 2021 02:35
Style Stalker
dusk arising said:
My life\'s pleasures were not, contrary to your author\'s note, measured by material success although I had a modicum of that.
Pleasures that money cannot buy will last and never fall from fashion, suffer mechanical breakdown, nor wear out.
The air of such, non financial, rewarding pleasures will follow you as your perfume of dignity.
March 7th, 2021 00:20
dusk arising said:
My life\'s pleasures were not, contrary to your author\'s note, measured by material success although I had a modicum of that.
Pleasures that money cannot buy will last and never fall from fashion, suffer mechanical breakdown, nor wear out.
The air of such, non financial, rewarding pleasures will follow you as your perfume of dignity.
March 7th, 2021 00:20