Comments received on poems by kaunisdiana
last signs of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words but dead does not mean forever in my mind, I was with my wife when she breathed her last breath but she is still with me and will never leave me.
Andy
April 29th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words but dead does not mean forever in my mind, I was with my wife when she breathed her last breath but she is still with me and will never leave me.
Andy
April 29th, 2021 00:45
last signs of life
Doggerel Dave said:
While I have a certain acceptance of death I do still have difficulty with that transition from the outside: one moment a living human being with a history , thoughts , responses and so on - the next nothing, noone. You capture that well. Thanks
April 28th, 2021 21:19
Doggerel Dave said:
While I have a certain acceptance of death I do still have difficulty with that transition from the outside: one moment a living human being with a history , thoughts , responses and so on - the next nothing, noone. You capture that well. Thanks
April 28th, 2021 21:19
3 things in common
L. B. Mek said:
\'Some people have a gift to see a Rigel\'..
stylistically poetic, challengingly rewarding: a wonderful read!
whilst reading your words I couldn\'t help but think
if those stale academic research papers
could be written with a poet\'s vision
it would look something like this, I think.. lol
April 26th, 2021 05:53
L. B. Mek said:
\'Some people have a gift to see a Rigel\'..
stylistically poetic, challengingly rewarding: a wonderful read!
whilst reading your words I couldn\'t help but think
if those stale academic research papers
could be written with a poet\'s vision
it would look something like this, I think.. lol
April 26th, 2021 05:53
3 things in common
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes those things we do have in common but we also have love and hope for a respectful world in common.
Welcome to MPS.
April 26th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes those things we do have in common but we also have love and hope for a respectful world in common.
Welcome to MPS.
April 26th, 2021 00:38
3 things in common
GON said:
ooh i\'m digging that last couplet. the rhyme is nice. also, you have an interesting perspective, but i can\'t help but think that time, fear, and death are all sort of the same thing. it reads like you\'re saying the thing that links us all together is anxiety, when i would make a different case.
but also the anxiety is real lmao.
April 25th, 2021 15:57
GON said:
ooh i\'m digging that last couplet. the rhyme is nice. also, you have an interesting perspective, but i can\'t help but think that time, fear, and death are all sort of the same thing. it reads like you\'re saying the thing that links us all together is anxiety, when i would make a different case.
but also the anxiety is real lmao.
April 25th, 2021 15:57
