Comments received on poems by poetic_person



His Song, Her Dance
L. B. Mek said:

tastefully worded
tender note in tone
tremendous in scope
and above all else
succinctly surreal, in its
poetic sublime...
a great read, thank you for sharing

July 22nd, 2021 03:00

in search of lost time
rebmasters said:

Beautiful and evocative of my favourite Proust

July 11th, 2021 06:22

in search of lost time
Accidental Poet said:

Wonderful write . Try as we may to forget that which cannot stay. But remember we will, that of our hearts fill. ; )

July 11th, 2021 06:10

Will Our Names Survive?
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true pp and it will be telling those stories for eternity.

Andy

July 4th, 2021 23:16

I See Laughter
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely and interesting words )


June 4th, 2021 15:40

Let\'s Be Frenemies
dusk arising said:

There\'s a lot of wisdom in your words. Especially when you really love someone you have to ask, \'which would be more painful, walking away or continuing a broken agonising relationship?\'

June 3rd, 2021 05:45

The Way Things Are
Goldfinch60 said:

The glory of life created from dust is a wonderful way to think of life. Good words.

Andy

June 3rd, 2021 00:07

The Way Things Are
Saxon Crow said:

Lovely imagery. Great poem

June 2nd, 2021 12:48

The Way Things Are
dusk arising said:

I like it. Nice story telling with a super last verse. I especially liked the use of repeating the ( that might not be an oak after all) which made me smile a lot (still smiling).

June 2nd, 2021 05:03

Song For Our Little Town
rebmasters said:

Absolutely gorgeous poem with a cracking opening line

May 26th, 2021 04:15

Saturday, Before Noon
sylviasearcher said:

There are so many layers to this...
Each time I read it I discover something new.

The last three lines are perfect

How clean they look
From where I sit
On a bench, in the cold

May 22nd, 2021 01:49

Saturday, Before Noon
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Comforting , nice read 🙂

May 22nd, 2021 01:21

I mean to fly
orchidee said:

Good write PP.
You a Birdman/Birdwoman?!

May 16th, 2021 02:13

I mean to fly
Goldfinch60 said:

From that bridge just look ahead to the wonderful life that awaits you, it is there for you.

Andy

May 16th, 2021 00:49

Ending Things
rebmasters said:

Your poems are beautiful. Because despite the trauma, you manage to find the beauty in your words - \'gods submerging in crystal lakes.\' They remind me of Simone Weil, Camus and Ocean Vuong. Because, after all, beauty is a tiny act of rebellion against existence being meaningless

May 13th, 2021 04:12

My Poetic Side
Goldfinch60 said:

May that poetic side of you forever bring us good words like these you have written.

Welcome to MPS.

May 13th, 2021 00:47

My Poetic Side
rebmasters said:

Brooding and soulful - wonderful

May 12th, 2021 16:29