Comments received on poems by poetic_person
His Song, Her Dance
L. B. Mek said:
tastefully worded
tender note in tone
tremendous in scope
and above all else
succinctly surreal, in its
poetic sublime...
a great read, thank you for sharing
July 22nd, 2021 03:00
L. B. Mek said:
tastefully worded
tender note in tone
tremendous in scope
and above all else
succinctly surreal, in its
poetic sublime...
a great read, thank you for sharing
July 22nd, 2021 03:00
in search of lost time
rebmasters said:
Beautiful and evocative of my favourite Proust
July 11th, 2021 06:22
rebmasters said:
Beautiful and evocative of my favourite Proust
July 11th, 2021 06:22
in search of lost time
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful write . Try as we may to forget that which cannot stay. But remember we will, that of our hearts fill. ; )
July 11th, 2021 06:10
Accidental Poet said:
Wonderful write . Try as we may to forget that which cannot stay. But remember we will, that of our hearts fill. ; )
July 11th, 2021 06:10
Will Our Names Survive?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true pp and it will be telling those stories for eternity.
Andy
July 4th, 2021 23:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true pp and it will be telling those stories for eternity.
Andy
July 4th, 2021 23:16
Let\'s Be Frenemies
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot of wisdom in your words. Especially when you really love someone you have to ask, \'which would be more painful, walking away or continuing a broken agonising relationship?\'
June 3rd, 2021 05:45
dusk arising said:
There\'s a lot of wisdom in your words. Especially when you really love someone you have to ask, \'which would be more painful, walking away or continuing a broken agonising relationship?\'
June 3rd, 2021 05:45
The Way Things Are
Goldfinch60 said:
The glory of life created from dust is a wonderful way to think of life. Good words.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
The glory of life created from dust is a wonderful way to think of life. Good words.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 00:07
The Way Things Are
dusk arising said:
I like it. Nice story telling with a super last verse. I especially liked the use of repeating the ( that might not be an oak after all) which made me smile a lot (still smiling).
June 2nd, 2021 05:03
dusk arising said:
I like it. Nice story telling with a super last verse. I especially liked the use of repeating the ( that might not be an oak after all) which made me smile a lot (still smiling).
June 2nd, 2021 05:03
Song For Our Little Town
rebmasters said:
Absolutely gorgeous poem with a cracking opening line
May 26th, 2021 04:15
rebmasters said:
Absolutely gorgeous poem with a cracking opening line
May 26th, 2021 04:15
Saturday, Before Noon
sylviasearcher said:
There are so many layers to this...
Each time I read it I discover something new.
The last three lines are perfect
How clean they look
From where I sit
On a bench, in the cold
May 22nd, 2021 01:49
sylviasearcher said:
There are so many layers to this...
Each time I read it I discover something new.
The last three lines are perfect
How clean they look
From where I sit
On a bench, in the cold
May 22nd, 2021 01:49
I mean to fly
Goldfinch60 said:
From that bridge just look ahead to the wonderful life that awaits you, it is there for you.
Andy
May 16th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
From that bridge just look ahead to the wonderful life that awaits you, it is there for you.
Andy
May 16th, 2021 00:49
Ending Things
rebmasters said:
Your poems are beautiful. Because despite the trauma, you manage to find the beauty in your words - \'gods submerging in crystal lakes.\' They remind me of Simone Weil, Camus and Ocean Vuong. Because, after all, beauty is a tiny act of rebellion against existence being meaningless
May 13th, 2021 04:12
rebmasters said:
Your poems are beautiful. Because despite the trauma, you manage to find the beauty in your words - \'gods submerging in crystal lakes.\' They remind me of Simone Weil, Camus and Ocean Vuong. Because, after all, beauty is a tiny act of rebellion against existence being meaningless
May 13th, 2021 04:12
My Poetic Side
Goldfinch60 said:
May that poetic side of you forever bring us good words like these you have written.
Welcome to MPS.
May 13th, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May that poetic side of you forever bring us good words like these you have written.
Welcome to MPS.
May 13th, 2021 00:47
