Comments received on poems by Advaitha
Schools
L. B. Mek said:
nowadays, schools and universities
are battle grounds for those trying
to corrupt, warp - infest
those innocent mind\'s: First.
it\'s all so pathetic, so heartachingly deplorable
and yet
what\'s the choice for a single parent
the divorcee\'s, who chose loyalty?
few, have the luxury to home school
and at the very least those schools, keep their children\'s body\'s, safe - mostly..
even if they\'re regressing/poisoning: their mind\'s...
(A Timely and poignant write
thanks for sharing!
this is a subject I hate to dwell on
because the frustrations, take days
to ease and return, to their repressed states..
I would still have an iota of belief in humanity\'s, \'humanity\' - left
if we could just:
Leave our Children Alone
and let them enjoy,
their oh - so, fleeting years
of Ignorant Bliss...
but No! even that obvious level of restraint and Awareness:
\'We\', can\'t manage!)
😡😠😩
October 8th, 2021 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
nowadays, schools and universities
are battle grounds for those trying
to corrupt, warp - infest
those innocent mind\'s: First.
it\'s all so pathetic, so heartachingly deplorable
and yet
what\'s the choice for a single parent
the divorcee\'s, who chose loyalty?
few, have the luxury to home school
and at the very least those schools, keep their children\'s body\'s, safe - mostly..
even if they\'re regressing/poisoning: their mind\'s...
(A Timely and poignant write
thanks for sharing!
this is a subject I hate to dwell on
because the frustrations, take days
to ease and return, to their repressed states..
I would still have an iota of belief in humanity\'s, \'humanity\' - left
if we could just:
Leave our Children Alone
and let them enjoy,
their oh - so, fleeting years
of Ignorant Bliss...
but No! even that obvious level of restraint and Awareness:
\'We\', can\'t manage!)
😡😠😩
October 8th, 2021 03:57
The Untitled
Advaitha said:
All oneselves who lower their standards for the sake of conformity shall be brought to accountability in the Epic Battle.
September 21st, 2021 12:55
Advaitha said:
All oneselves who lower their standards for the sake of conformity shall be brought to accountability in the Epic Battle.
September 21st, 2021 12:55
The Untitled
dusk arising said:
Oh it\'s great so see arrogance displayed so blatantly. Nice expose.
September 21st, 2021 12:15
dusk arising said:
Oh it\'s great so see arrogance displayed so blatantly. Nice expose.
September 21st, 2021 12:15
The Planet Enterprise - 2
L. B. Mek said:
insightfully impassioned, commentary
thanks for sharing
August 2nd, 2021 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
insightfully impassioned, commentary
thanks for sharing
August 2nd, 2021 04:42
Wake Up Call
L. B. Mek said:
ignore the cynical vultures
this, is an insightful and well measured write
only those who choose to feed
their own miserable ignorance can dispute its merits
thanks for choosing to share, dear poet!
don\'t be disheartened, keep your truth Raw
and bravely unfiltered
those who choose to not hide: will read and understand!
the rest, well
they\'ll go-on with their pathetic choices, to inflict
even more hate and disheartening mischief, to maintain
their survival cocoon of self-pitying, misery
too broken and scared
to trust or hope in anything better, anymore
June 17th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
ignore the cynical vultures
this, is an insightful and well measured write
only those who choose to feed
their own miserable ignorance can dispute its merits
thanks for choosing to share, dear poet!
don\'t be disheartened, keep your truth Raw
and bravely unfiltered
those who choose to not hide: will read and understand!
the rest, well
they\'ll go-on with their pathetic choices, to inflict
even more hate and disheartening mischief, to maintain
their survival cocoon of self-pitying, misery
too broken and scared
to trust or hope in anything better, anymore
June 17th, 2021 04:51
Wake Up Call
Doggerel Dave said:
\"You talkin\' to me?\" Who do you think you are? AND Who do you think I am?
Context is all.
June 16th, 2021 19:23
Doggerel Dave said:
\"You talkin\' to me?\" Who do you think you are? AND Who do you think I am?
Context is all.
June 16th, 2021 19:23
Wake Up Call
Saxon Crow said:
Agreed. But it takes everyone to say no in this hells world
June 16th, 2021 09:14
Saxon Crow said:
Agreed. But it takes everyone to say no in this hells world
June 16th, 2021 09:14
DEATH
dusk arising said:
Ahem cool last line - stating the bleedin obvious - we are all gonna die sunshine.
June 16th, 2021 08:55
dusk arising said:
Ahem cool last line - stating the bleedin obvious - we are all gonna die sunshine.
June 16th, 2021 08:55
Wake Up Call
dusk arising said:
What a shame you forgot to give any hint of who \"THEY\" are in your piece today.
June 16th, 2021 08:52
dusk arising said:
What a shame you forgot to give any hint of who \"THEY\" are in your piece today.
June 16th, 2021 08:52
The Planet Enterprise -1
Goldfinch60 said:
That endgame is with them but it seems to be a long way off from us mere minions.
Andy
June 16th, 2021 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
That endgame is with them but it seems to be a long way off from us mere minions.
Andy
June 16th, 2021 00:11
The Planet Enterprise -1
Doggerel Dave said:
Again, a powerful piece.
And I\'d still like to know just a little about you, how you got to where you are now.
June 15th, 2021 19:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Again, a powerful piece.
And I\'d still like to know just a little about you, how you got to where you are now.
June 15th, 2021 19:21
The Planet Enterprise -1
dusk arising said:
Is this the epitaph for the wealthiest organisation in the world - the roman catholic church. Guilty on all counts?
If in doubt about their wealth - google \"how wealthy is the RC church\"
June 15th, 2021 08:12
dusk arising said:
Is this the epitaph for the wealthiest organisation in the world - the roman catholic church. Guilty on all counts?
If in doubt about their wealth - google \"how wealthy is the RC church\"
June 15th, 2021 08:12
DEATH
Doggerel Dave said:
On one level I admired this, Advaitha.
On another level I\'d like to know where you are coming from before I gave it a wholehearted endorsement.
June 14th, 2021 19:55
Doggerel Dave said:
On one level I admired this, Advaitha.
On another level I\'d like to know where you are coming from before I gave it a wholehearted endorsement.
June 14th, 2021 19:55
