Comments received on poems by LandraM



THE MORTAL LOVE OF NARCISSUS.
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!
I look forward to reading more of your word, dear Poet
genuinely! can\'t wait..
\'Come my soul, grant me but one touch I beg of you,
And let me feel what I dare imagine.\'
\'Iheard rejection could kill even the dead,\'
\'Istep in the flames and you still follow,
From the shattered glass below I see your eyes match mine,\'
\'If we cannot meet in this world then we can meet in the flames,
Once and for all our hearts will be united.\'

July 2nd, 2021 04:14