Comments received on poems by Cheka
Seeds in the Sand
Cheka said:
Thank you for the comment.
Figuring our the website so therefore the modification of my pen name.
July 4th, 2021 02:24
Cheka said:
Thank you for the comment.
Figuring our the website so therefore the modification of my pen name.
July 4th, 2021 02:24
Seeds in the Sand
Doggerel Dave said:
Cheka now? well hello anyway...
Your work is again clearly and cleanly written as was your first piece. And continuing the debate - I don\'t think your young refugee in Kenya has much choice with respect to \'who they meet, talk with, the places they chose to live, go to, etc.\'
Your poem was graphic and extremely painful to read - kudos
July 3rd, 2021 21:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Cheka now? well hello anyway...
Your work is again clearly and cleanly written as was your first piece. And continuing the debate - I don\'t think your young refugee in Kenya has much choice with respect to \'who they meet, talk with, the places they chose to live, go to, etc.\'
Your poem was graphic and extremely painful to read - kudos
July 3rd, 2021 21:20
The Time in Between
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Cheka, the person we become is so important.
Welcome to MPS.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Cheka, the person we become is so important.
Welcome to MPS.
Andy
July 3rd, 2021 01:12
The Time in Between
Doggerel Dave said:
Hello CB…I really relate to your first two stanzas, where I feel that there are masses of people who wouldn’t have been who they are if they had any choice. Last stanza is a great conclusion.
Of the other two, they are only valid if we have the opportunity to meet people and touch hearts…
A good, plainly written piece I really enjoyed.
Welcome to MPS. Feel free to comment on mine and the rest which will come your way – this place works well with lively debate.
July 2nd, 2021 19:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Hello CB…I really relate to your first two stanzas, where I feel that there are masses of people who wouldn’t have been who they are if they had any choice. Last stanza is a great conclusion.
Of the other two, they are only valid if we have the opportunity to meet people and touch hearts…
A good, plainly written piece I really enjoyed.
Welcome to MPS. Feel free to comment on mine and the rest which will come your way – this place works well with lively debate.
July 2nd, 2021 19:34
