Comments received on poems by beano
Where I End and You Begin
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking and nicely done.
\"Morning, and its forceful breath
Shakes the dangling blossom from the tree.\" a great line
August 5th, 2024 07:27
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking and nicely done.
\"Morning, and its forceful breath
Shakes the dangling blossom from the tree.\" a great line
August 5th, 2024 07:27
Elegy
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'\"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,—that is all.
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.\"
John Keats
(I laud the Veracity
imbued
in your Beautiful poetry)
\'I meet ghosts who do not know they’re dead,
Who recite the poetry from the shade on the dial,
And know not from where, of a yet to come...
Of a wind that will blow dust from your throne,\'
I bow to your superior talent
April 21st, 2023 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
\'\"Beauty is truth, truth beauty,—that is all.
Ye know on earth, and all ye need to know.\"
John Keats
(I laud the Veracity
imbued
in your Beautiful poetry)
\'I meet ghosts who do not know they’re dead,
Who recite the poetry from the shade on the dial,
And know not from where, of a yet to come...
Of a wind that will blow dust from your throne,\'
I bow to your superior talent
April 21st, 2023 06:46
A Voice
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully vivid, poetic depiction
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
September 16th, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderfully vivid, poetic depiction
an intriguing read, thanks for sharing
September 16th, 2021 05:27
The Final Frontier
L. B. Mek said:
\'But space is bounded by the small corners in this room.
I jangle skies and oceans in my pocket, like loose change.\'
indeed, Introspection
be our True, final frontier..
great imagery, themed yet still diverse
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 3rd, 2021 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'But space is bounded by the small corners in this room.
I jangle skies and oceans in my pocket, like loose change.\'
indeed, Introspection
be our True, final frontier..
great imagery, themed yet still diverse
thanks for sharing, dear poet
September 3rd, 2021 03:42
On Things Now Lost.
dusk arising said:
Such vision and image are our dreams made upon.
August 27th, 2021 08:17
dusk arising said:
Such vision and image are our dreams made upon.
August 27th, 2021 08:17
On Things Now Lost.
L. B. Mek said:
that double edged, yield
we manifest
with our life\'s blinkered, toiling...
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
August 27th, 2021 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
that double edged, yield
we manifest
with our life\'s blinkered, toiling...
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
August 27th, 2021 03:45
To A Shadow.
L. B. Mek said:
\'And how when you\'re a child
Worlds can change during a meal.
When the adults in the room hesitated,
I saw then that you lived
In the gap between their words.
I was raised through fear
To believe you spoke only
The language of regret.\'
(that lurking shadow of anxiety keeping us company
during those dark hours
where our assumed certainties, reveal themselves
to be our quicksand of regrets...)
a great read
(in my humble opinion)
thanks for sharing, and inspiring
my little scribbled reply
August 19th, 2021 02:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'And how when you\'re a child
Worlds can change during a meal.
When the adults in the room hesitated,
I saw then that you lived
In the gap between their words.
I was raised through fear
To believe you spoke only
The language of regret.\'
(that lurking shadow of anxiety keeping us company
during those dark hours
where our assumed certainties, reveal themselves
to be our quicksand of regrets...)
a great read
(in my humble opinion)
thanks for sharing, and inspiring
my little scribbled reply
August 19th, 2021 02:34
Midsummer.
L. B. Mek said:
what an impressive write, thank you!
for choosing to share your talent, dear poet
August 16th, 2021 03:41
L. B. Mek said:
what an impressive write, thank you!
for choosing to share your talent, dear poet
August 16th, 2021 03:41
Through a Half Open Door
Lorna said:
I so love short and atmospheric........ I see the room, I see the past.
August 15th, 2021 10:46
Lorna said:
I so love short and atmospheric........ I see the room, I see the past.
August 15th, 2021 10:46
The Boy on the Hill
L. B. Mek said:
\'That high beating sun with his palm.
Ignorant of *time\'s diligence
He’d look down for hours on his world,
The burnished street below\'..
what an interesting read, a little mysterious
and meaningfully, so open to varied interpretations
thanks for sharing!
July 13th, 2021 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'That high beating sun with his palm.
Ignorant of *time\'s diligence
He’d look down for hours on his world,
The burnished street below\'..
what an interesting read, a little mysterious
and meaningfully, so open to varied interpretations
thanks for sharing!
July 13th, 2021 03:46
The Boy on the Hill
Goldfinch60 said:
That transience will always be there for him to move on into his life.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:18
Goldfinch60 said:
That transience will always be there for him to move on into his life.
Andy
July 12th, 2021 15:18
The Fall
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see the end of the world in your words BEANO, we need to save it before it gets destroyed by homo sapiens.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see the end of the world in your words BEANO, we need to save it before it gets destroyed by homo sapiens.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:40
Through a Half Open Door
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write beano and a great image of departed love.
Andy
July 6th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Very intriguing write beano and a great image of departed love.
Andy
July 6th, 2021 00:36
Through a Half Open Door
L. B. Mek said:
those remnants of tangible, hope
where all that survives
the shredding of Time
is a glimpsed, idealised scene
and fortunately, meaningfully
that\'s - just about: enough...
such a wonderful poem
thanks for sharing dear poet
July 5th, 2021 06:59
L. B. Mek said:
those remnants of tangible, hope
where all that survives
the shredding of Time
is a glimpsed, idealised scene
and fortunately, meaningfully
that\'s - just about: enough...
such a wonderful poem
thanks for sharing dear poet
July 5th, 2021 06:59
Through a Half Open Door
Eugene S. said:
A starkly vivid scene. Very focused. There\'s an absence of time when I read this. Thumbs up!
July 5th, 2021 04:24
Eugene S. said:
A starkly vivid scene. Very focused. There\'s an absence of time when I read this. Thumbs up!
July 5th, 2021 04:24
When The Soul Was Born
flyingfish said:
A challenging piece. I enjoyed it! Cheers
July 4th, 2021 16:59
flyingfish said:
A challenging piece. I enjoyed it! Cheers
July 4th, 2021 16:59
