Comments received on poems by dotlines



Emotional Sunburn
L. B. Mek said:

I like the empowering theme
a sobering form of defiance and gusto
yes! we must, find a way to take
that next step, somehow - or else
we\'ll all be doomed:
\'Fearful of even the gentlest touch
And its intangible scorching.

Your hunt for control in chaos, erupts to
Shield perceived pain and danger,\'
(thanks for sharing, dear Poet
a great read!)

July 6th, 2021 03:25