Comments received on poems by Chloe Miller
The Freest I\'ve Felt
L. B. Mek said:
\'Exploration was a must.
I ventured out.
It was all mine, after all.
I ruled this land of sun.
Population: 1.\'
wonderfully creative and immersive in detail
loved the subtleties in your exquisite wording
a fantastical, poetic treat!
(and thanks to Doggerel Dave
I\'m now a little less ignorant, as well)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 15th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'Exploration was a must.
I ventured out.
It was all mine, after all.
I ruled this land of sun.
Population: 1.\'
wonderfully creative and immersive in detail
loved the subtleties in your exquisite wording
a fantastical, poetic treat!
(and thanks to Doggerel Dave
I\'m now a little less ignorant, as well)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 15th, 2021 05:47
The Freest I\'ve Felt
Doggerel Dave said:
I agree, Uluru is a fine place. And your piece makes it easy to get swept up in your enthusiasm A fine write.
But let\'s not forget the willful destruction of both people and environment which has occurred since 1788.
Is that the meaning of the line \'And though I mourn that lovely land\'?
July 15th, 2021 05:07
Doggerel Dave said:
I agree, Uluru is a fine place. And your piece makes it easy to get swept up in your enthusiasm A fine write.
But let\'s not forget the willful destruction of both people and environment which has occurred since 1788.
Is that the meaning of the line \'And though I mourn that lovely land\'?
July 15th, 2021 05:07
The Freest I\'ve Felt
dusk arising said:
Very enjoyable read. Superb artwork accompanies your piece, so well chosen.
July 15th, 2021 02:15
dusk arising said:
Very enjoyable read. Superb artwork accompanies your piece, so well chosen.
July 15th, 2021 02:15
One Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Chloe but still some tome to go.
Welcome to MPS.
July 15th, 2021 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Chloe but still some tome to go.
Welcome to MPS.
July 15th, 2021 01:02
One Day
dusk arising said:
Great composition. It\'s all only the nature of things.
July 14th, 2021 09:23
dusk arising said:
Great composition. It\'s all only the nature of things.
July 14th, 2021 09:23
